Reviews for Onodera Ritsu's Sister |
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![]() ![]() ![]() U have amazing ideas dude... also to the miracle plz plz plz have an update I can't wait for the little girl and for the tears of takano's eyes |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one cute and sad story I've ever read. I give many kudos to you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this was a very interesting story! I enjoyed reading it. Riko reminds me of a character in one of my stories. :) Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How considerate and nice of Takano not to ravish Ritsu during Riko's crisis...at least Takano knows the word self-control! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One advantage of being Takasno's bestfriend vs. Takano's lover: simply granting your favor at workplace lol... Hate to admit but good job, Riko lol Can't stop lol when Takano almost chuckled with Onodera's sudden death aura |
![]() ![]() ![]() 200% Takano is indeed a horndog seme; Otherwise, Onodera could have confessed his love in less than a year...sigh... Grrrrr...Riko, you're ruining a perfect rated lemony M of Takano and Onodera! Can't blame Onodera from not keeping down their hot session with Takano. Takano is such an intense lover who's proud having Onodera moan so loud for the neighbors to hear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely Ritsu became Takano and Riko's punching bag... Can't believe that a quiet, hardworking, and sensitive guy deserves this:-( |
![]() ![]() ![]() The mmost hilarious chapter so far! Truly Takano and Riko became friends. Kinda pity Ritsu a lil bit... My hunch was correct that Ritsu's sister is working at BLs. Who knows that she can be sadistic to Ritsu seriously?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Geezzzz... I want an explicit rated m. Seems like Takano got a Ritsu gender-bending doppelganger aka Riko to harass Ritsu lol |
![]() ![]() ITS A DILDO ISN'T IT! SHE BROUGHT A DILDO! |
![]() ![]() When Riko was giving him his present i could have SWORE it was going to be a dildo :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing loved it dramandic but fluffy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right. First off. I really liked this story. It's not perfect, but the idea and just the humour and the way you put it all together I found quite fun and enjoyable. Great read. However, just few points. I felt that the ending was a bit rushed, and more closure regarding the whole thing would be great. Second, it's not possible to get identical twins with different genders. SO unless Riko got a sex change that wasn't mentioned, or Ritsu's a closet female (not bloody likely with Takano molestations), they have to be fraternal twins. But really liked the story regardless and I think that you were trying to end it before it should have. :( Would have liked to see it longer. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! I hope Riko gets better. Hehe, I would love to see Ritsu in a dress xD I would also love to see you write an epilogue for this :3 Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading your future stories! x3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story! Your an amazing writer! |