Poor mite, so stubborn and determined he can't see how it's killing him! Want to know how it ends, is there another chapter? Post soon please.

This is heart-wrenching to read. This is something that I struggle with too and I am in awe of your ability to portray it. I'm sorry that you've had a rough time and I hope that things are improving now.

Your writing is beautiful and Sherlock is so believable. I love his warped logic about food, it's just so dead on. You don't romanticise eating issues and that in itself is an incredible achievement, even for someone who has/does struggle themselves! I'm really looking forward to the next update.

This is amazing please keep writing. Don't doubt yourself.

You're back and in top form. I was THRILLED when I got an e-mail saying that you had updated this story. I hope to see more from you soon!

*claps* *claps again* *calls friend over has her read it begin to clap* *whole audience appearing out of no where begin to clap* This is just for the whole story thus far! SO PERFECT :D! *whispers* I wish I had the same writing skills you did :3 *back to normal loud volume* You don't even know how much I adore your writing skills! I have been on this site for close to a year now and you are one of the BEST writers on here :D Also I think we all hate our writings :P We are our own biggest critics right? But as I see it, we are as perfect as we want to be.
I am aware of my stories general shittiness (for lack of better term) but people seem to enjoy it so I keep doing it. That is why I write fanfiction really... For other people to enjoy. I also write it because it is fun and easy to do. It is the book I am writing that frustrates me... I am having trouble building my character Celyn... It'll come to me :P
KEEP WRITING AND NEVER GIVE UP! :D

I have reread this story dozens of times in the time you have been away, honestly. I'm not even lying, it is that incredible. I've never really forgotten about it, no matter how long it has been, and I've been reading since the very beginning. I was surprised and shocked when I saw this story pop up today, having gone to long without it, but that does not mean I'd forgotten it. I don't think anyone could forget a story like this one, especially when it comes from such a place of pain for you. I'm glad that you may have found some help on this site, and I'm glad that the words of others have helped you. But please, one thing you need to know is that there is nothing wrong with this story. First of all, I know that when I read fanfiction, I almost never judge. And when I do judge, it is never on something like this. I understand that people go through horrible things, and I would never judge someone for something that is inherently out of their control. I have friends who have dealt with the topics of this story, maybe not on the level that you have, but I've always tried to understand them as best I can. Also, when something is this raw, this real, grammar can be excused. Half the time I don't even notice when something is grammatically incorrect. I know that in my own writing, I ignore grammar when dealing with touchy subject matter. Anyway, I hope that I might see more of this soon, but never feel pressured to update. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

I love this story SOOO much. Please update soon :)

Oh gosh. A cliffhanger ! Please write more ! Can't wait to read the next chapter

Up until now I may have fallen into the category of "silent readers", but please don't think I was ever judging you! This story feels so grotesque and real, I just love all the emotion you packed into it. I've been hooked since chapter 1. I do hope you continue, and don't get freaked out by all the wallflowers!

Very nice story. It's painful to read, but I hope you take that as a compliment. Poor Sherlock :c

great writing keep it up trust me i find it very powerful

Wow. This is getting pretty intense and I'm loving every minute of it (the flashback of Sherlock announcing he's going to be pirate, LOVE it)!

I hope you continue and you won't get overwhelmed by the story's hit count. Don't be worried about the silent readers. As long as no one is being openly rude about your story, you have nothing to worry about. :)

this is really really good and different from anything else of similar context i've read. Keep going )

You're doing fine. Please update soon. I want to know how Sherlock finally comes to terms with his problems, if indeed, he ever truly does.

I really like this story - especially the way you've developed Sherlock's character :)
You don't need to be paranoid or insecure - it's completely normal for people to not review fanfics. Don't hate yourself either - I'm sure you're a wonderful person. After all, all good writers are wonderful people :) I completely understand about being insecure cos I am too *hugs* xxx

With ref to your A/N, I hope you are finding this writing cathartic - I did wonder about the 'research ' behind the story.

It is a very good story - not in the least amateur - and I look forward to reading more.