and he failed too, couldn't avoid being bound. time to keep searching...

I kind of hate the professors and the faculty in this school. They only take action because a noble was harmed. But they wouldn't give a damn if the "commoner" was killed because he's a commoner. It's absolutely disgusting, I wish Shiki went in and showed all of them what he's made of

This is laughably bad.

Now this is just bad writing. Testing new ideas? Don't try to fix somethinv that isn't broken.

Why did you made Shiki into such a helpless whimp? You do know that with his eyes he can see magic (spells) and "kill" them, right? Or you didn't? If you dont know at least that much about Nasuverse then why do you even try writing aa Tsukihime crossover?

I have to ask this question since this is Familiar of Zero will Shiki also have the Mark of Gandalf because that Rune is more powerful than even his eyes of Mystic perception since the power of the Rune comes from a God.

Shiki is a good person cursed with a great power but he will be more useful than Saito will ever be with Louise but dealing with someone like Louise will be troublesome knowing her Tsundere traits.

Aren't Shiki's eyes bluish silver in color while he's using them? Believe me, I've searched up Shiki Tohno in Google Images. In some, his eyes are black or onyx in color. In others, a slightly dark Ice blue with cat like slits. In some, just blue. In a few, he has the blue silver eyes. In some, it appears that his eyes are somewhat dark blue at the top before quickly gradiating into a light blue that appears to have a bit of silver or an Ice blue consistency. I personally prefer all of the blue ones. They make his eyes seem more ethereal and full of power for some reason.

Pathetic.

Excellent story obviously

Salamander to the Russian Empress, Dragon to the ... of the composite France-Spain, the source is rather interesting, it's a bit sad the author died.

Re: Summary
What anime are you talking about? There's no anime. TSUKIHIME. HAS. NO. ANIME. Yet. Comprende? Maybe Ufotable can pick up Tsukihime. They did a great job with UBW.

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Yeah No thanks.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I was under the impression that closing one's eyes doesn't actually make the lines go away.

That guy acts mor like an angy Nanaya or ally of that clan that wants Shiki to reach the full potential of his bloodline, rather than an enemy that wants him dead.