This is bad, I died reading. Hope you improved as time passed along. Early fic, I know. Still, kudos for publishing it.

this was amazing i almost started crying but you could of add rejie paul's brother the one who tries to ship them

Beautiful as always :)

Now I kinda want to try this if I went to a new school... I wouldn't though.

So far I've only read the first sentence and my immediate first thought is 'I wonder if Dawn has an OTP?'

That was so sweet & awesome!

Good story

I can Tottally see Dawn doing that, and maybe there should be something like that at every school. I believe in the true beauty within, so thats why I only have 2 friends... but they are like me and im happy with that. Cewt.

Those were manly tears that Paul cried. Great story.

Really cool story :D The plot is pretty unique, at least I haven't seen it before :P IKARISHIPPING IS JUST THE CUTEST!

GAH! So cute! The concept of this was super original, and really neat! I could see Dawn doing something like that, and cringing on the inside because she had to wear ugly clothing, lol!
DAWWWW and their nicknames for each other were so sweet they nearly gave me a cavity!
I loved this!

Wow, that OTP sure was a brilliant idea of Dawn's! Loved this one shot :D

This story was REALLY GOOD! And I thought there was another chapter...
flashback:
OMFG DIS CHAPTER IS SO GOOD! ONTO NEXT CHAPTER!
-insert disclaimer-
O_O
-faints-
Anyway, it was a good story and I really enjoyed it! Perhaps make it a bit longer? :)

WHOAH! GEAR CHANGE ISLE: Paul! He did a flipping 180! *Snigger* Pecha berry...Great Story Cookie!

Love the story! Kinda funny too because my teacher was talking about the Pythagoras theorem not too long ago!

I love it i love it i love it! :-)