Reviews for Pretty When You Cry |
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adam chapter 1 . 3/11/2015 hot |
ninez chapter 1 . 8/13/2013 It might be pure filth, but it was so undeniably hot. Description is, as always, spot on and so completely shudder-inducing. I always love Leon bottoming, and the fact that he's fighting back is so cute. I normally like it when it's an even playing field but seeing Leon dominated was so hot. Thank you so much for writing this! |
koenokokoro chapter 1 . 8/11/2013 Does spit-take, Oh My Fucking Gods, That's my prompt! And shit, YES, that's what I wanted! And the sudden 'not fighting, but not helping you either' thing is just exactly what I pictured, and of course, Leon's little biting comment at the end- Just perfect AWSOMENESS! My friend, I send you much love, and I can't believe I only found this just now! Squeaks and rereads... |
Kai-Chan94 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013 Awesome new story! I think I almost drooled at the nummy goodness of Cloud totally dominating Leon. It had a bunch of friction that just left you with a wonderful aftertaste. Thanks and good work as always! |