Reviews for Pretty When You Cry
adam chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
hot
ninez chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
It might be pure filth, but it was so undeniably hot. Description is, as always, spot on and so completely shudder-inducing. I always love Leon bottoming, and the fact that he's fighting back is so cute. I normally like it when it's an even playing field but seeing Leon dominated was so hot.

Thank you so much for writing this!
koenokokoro chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Does spit-take, Oh My Fucking Gods, That's my prompt!

And shit, YES, that's what I wanted! And the sudden 'not fighting, but not helping you either' thing is just exactly what I pictured, and of course, Leon's little biting comment at the end- Just perfect AWSOMENESS!

My friend, I send you much love, and I can't believe I only found this just now! Squeaks and rereads...
Kai-Chan94 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Awesome new story! I think I almost drooled at the nummy goodness of Cloud totally dominating Leon. It had a bunch of friction that just left you with a wonderful aftertaste. Thanks and good work as always!