You do know CRA means he can take more than one wife, right? You even said that in the chapter where you first mentioned the CRA. Naruto even said to those girls he wanted them as his wives in previous chapters. In fact, Naruto even fought one if the Hyuuga girls fit her hand in marriage. So what’s up with the sudden change in Naruto only taking one wife and the girls being cool with that in chapter 7? Reread you story and get your own damn facts straight! That plot inconsistency along with blatant and plentiful spelling, grammar, writing, and paragraphing errors means: Get a beta or freaking proofread. What should have been a unique and great fanfic instead reeks of immature and juvenile writing, and a complete disregard for quality and your readers.

And pairing Ino and Kiba? Seriously? Your reasons for that was rubbish, and the pairing was unnecessary. Especially when the main focus is Naruto and the Hyuuga family.

Man I loved it, what a ride.

I read the whole thing and I can say it was alright. The only improvements I can see is:
1.) Spell and grammar checking.
2.) Know when to space out a paragraph as a large block of text can kill a story due to readers getting tunnel vision.

If Naruto is 18 then that would make Hanabi 12 not 18 n a genin not chunin since he was 13 in 1st arc and Hanabi 7

Holy...fuck! I dont even know what to say but...your story was freakin awesome#!#!#!#

that was good keep the chapters coming

HOTT! Keep going!

What if Naruto was born Hyuga.

good story

WhT da fudge was this how could cheat in hinata like that

Okay...I've heard it with this. I have an OC pretty much the same personality and name as the one in this chapter...the difference is appearance. I just can't stop imagining this character as mine, it just feels so weird...

OMG, this story is too funny XD

while i am not a big Hinata fan, i still enjoyed your story

Vh

You oppsesed with sex, your girl dump you? No one cheats on their with all her family! Espichily naruto he's cool and honest. I look forward toward your future development year future.