Reviews for His Sister, His Spouse
mfalways17 chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
This is more than amazing, more than wonderful. It's so Elliot, so perfect...actually, this is the perfect explanation to why he left. This is it. It makes it all make sense. It's flawless, beautiful, amazing, poetic writing. I'm in tears. Wow.
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
Amazing story! I really enjoyed it!
alexindigo chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
Ugh. This has to be one of my favourite of your fics. Heartbreakingly poignant, I can feel Elliot's anguish as he says goodbye. Which is a damn fine accomplishment Min because even on the best of days I barely tolerate him much less empathise with the fool. He's broken her heart too many times to count and this right here, a glimpse into how his heart is breaking (albeit from his own doing)? Beautiful. One of my favourite EO fics of all time is a story called Failure To Thrive. This reminds me so much of that.

Brilliant as always. Thank so much for sharing! :) Would you consider a follow up to this where he either reflects on the day he did let her go or the day he decides to eff it and try again with her? Basically anything which has them together in the end, that has Liv get the happy ending (beginning) she deserves with the man she loves. :)
Seshathena chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
This...is just...perfect. My heart actually aches right now.
Faye chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
So so so beautiful. I am heart broken but so glad I stumbled across this
poetif chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Wow, that hurt. It was good though, well written. With so many E/O fans dogging Olivia's relationship with Brian, calling it forced and other not so nice names, they should all take a gander at this story. They well and truly had their chance in Season 8 and he royally messed up and missed the mark. She shouldn't spend her life waiting for something that'll never happen and I for one am glad she's found happiness, "forced" or not. Good job!
drivingmissbenson chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Oh My Gosh.

This story is PERFECTION. I can't...

Wow.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Damn girl, this is good!
lauren chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
love this... duh.
ftloga chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
I'm actually reading everyone of your stories right now but again, good job! there's something different about your writing and I love it!
sera0783 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Holy crap, that was intense. Brilliant writing. I felt his pain, and regret, so much. I... No... Sorry, I have no more words right now... Just awesome.
pacificbluegirl chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Wow, so well written! I like how you really pushed Elliot's character and sort of tore him apart, and put him back together again. This story also very much got to me because it's exactly how I see them... he just never got round to it. Today the timing wasn't quite right, but they would have tomorrow... and then all of a sudden they didn't anymore. Such a strange mix of love and sadness. Loved it! Thanks for sharing.
Kayenes chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Wow, this was something. I knew, I KNEW as soon as Hendricks got him to finally admit it to himself what he was really feeling, it'd turn out the way it did. Amazing writing. The way you tied in the two episodes was brilliant. I'm sad but I'm not sad because the writers during that season suck. LOL.. *runs away*
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Beautiful
liv.and.el chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
**SOBS** You make a great shrink, but oh, the angstasy! (so sorry about your baby :{ )
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