Reviews for Life of the Independent
fvdv123 chapter 43 . 7/6
i like this story , to bad it is spread out over 7 years
the good part is the author doesn't give up
dezi88 chapter 14 . 7/6
I like the story so for.
but why does Harry not remember anymore, that he is a parselmouth? I earlier chapters he got the info from gringotts and he apparently even trained a bit in it.
I can understand, that he goes back to be more childlike and maybe even forgot that he was emancipated, but that looked strange to me.
pavook chapter 7 . 6/24
This is over the top.
First, if Harry's parents knew about Peter's betrail, why were they still in Godric place which was not protected? They should be anywhere else in that case. It's illogical.
Second, Harry is studying for a few months or so, how could he become so OP? Natural apparition aside, his other abilities came out of nowhere and wandless magic doesn't cut it. A few months and he is almost at the level of Merlin himself. A few years and he would be a God in this trend.
Third, learning a new language our of what, some books? Hardly possible without ever hearing it first in that amount of time to hold any meaningful conversation. It's not like he learned German, goblin language being vastly different from anything he ever heard.
scottyeo chapter 43 . 6/21
It's been a good read thank you But
More please Sir
Guest chapter 43 . 6/18
Regrettably your chapters are becoming shorter. You spent a lot of time on the Harry-Neville bromance in between, and the story is not progressing either on the war front or with Merlin's Academy. I guess real life has you bogged down and that should always take priority in life
Jay-4est chapter 13 . 6/19
Just finished chap 13 wasn’t thinking of a new school very clever can’t wait to see what happens next it’s getting good
Jay-4est chapter 1 . 6/19
Hey just found your story and I must say I’m looking forward to read the rest of it and what ever you come up with next. May the writing focus be with you, your friendly reviewer Jay()
TheActualRealOne chapter 43 . 6/18
Spent a better part of an hour binging this story and I don't regret it! Great story so far and I can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 9 . 5/31
Two mistakes I saw when reading this chapter were when Kingsley said he used Occulemency on the Dursley’s and also you wrote that Sirius was imprisoned for 9 years yet Harry is 9 and he was arrested when Harry was 15 months so Sirius has only been in jail for 8 years.
DarthDane chapter 29 . 5/25
I don't know if I'm missing something or not, but it has been bugging me for the past few chapters. Is Harry not emancipated and THE Lord Potter? So dumbledore had no legal hold on him whatsoever even with Sirius back? And why did he have to ask Sirius to buy him a new broomstick when he has complete access to his own faults? Why is he letting Sirius and Remus make choices for him when he is technically his own adult. They're basically coddling him. It seems like him being a lord and emancipated has been lost throughout the chapters.
I'm also kind of disappointed in the way harry is acting. He knows occlumency, yet is so prone emotional outbursts. He even mentioned he can turn it on or off. Yet it seems like he is not even using them.
jami304 chapter 43 . 5/21
i absolutely love it cant wait for more
lmill123 chapter 43 . 5/19
This was a really great story. I'm just sorry that you never finished it. I really hope you come back and finish it.

I love the friendship between Harry and Lucas. I especially enjoyed how they showed Neville what a real friendship was suppose to be like. Ron and Hermione's reactions when Neville started doing better in his classes was so typical them. It wasn't that Neville was stupid or not powerful, but he lacked self-confidence.

Besides, it would be so fitting if Dumbledore was knocked from his welfare pedestal.
bellerose slytherpuff chapter 43 . 5/16
Please update, this is a really good fanfiction. I can't wait for Neville to find out James is Harry.
ForsakenPhantom chapter 43 . 5/11
Cannot wait for the next chapter
Guest chapter 14 . 5/9
PLAN B, PLAN B, I just want to see him FAIL!
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