Interesting story so far and I would love to see a continued sometime in the future.

I love me some Yang!

Loved it! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Da Cook? Are you talking about mobsters or Orks

Meh.

Sorry but I hate how people act when others mention "conscription" which in this one means outright slavery.

"I will die before becoming a slave. I will kill before becoming one, and I will do my best to bring any criminal that deals with such to justice. You want to conscript me? A fancy word for you becoming my master and I a slave.

Disgusting slaver, monster, I will never trust you nor any who hold you in such high esteem as to make you a General. Pathetic strong arming trash/"

Now that would have set one hell of a tone. But no, no one ever actually has the balls to stand up for themselves in stories that way unless they are being written as 'evil'.

Fun little story - shame to see it abandoned. I liked the influences Voldemort was having on Harry but with him still feeling like he was Harry. That combined with him being in the criminal underworld gave his character a welcome edge. Hope to see this updated at some point, cheers mate.

This is a truly magnificent cross over fic, not to mention it has one of the most under-appreciated characters in RWBY, Melanie as a main character. Please update soon, literally dying here.

I really wish you would update this

This story is really good. There definitely isn't enough good RWBY fics, certainly not enough with the twins. All your character portrayals are great so far, good to see that Harry is strong (making the most of how powerful magic is) without being a gary-sue. I love that he has all that power too his name and doesn't back down letting the stronger personalities in RWBY walk all over him.

You're getting up to team selection now and the way I see it you have a multitude of options there.
You've introduced penny early so she would actually be a really good partner for Harry.

And here comes the obligatory begging for updates

please update soon

I need moar

Please continue this fic

And it seems you’ve stopped writing all together. Aww man, and I was really starting to like this story.

Well, from the stories I've read before, this story could end up a harem fic or Harry could end up with any of the girls(Blake, Yang, Pyrra, Miltia, Melonie, or the twins).

I really wish you'd continue this

I hope you end up coming back to this story again. It's hitting a point that is really getting interesting now!

Some notes in semi-random order:
-I like that Harry isn't just automatically overpowering Voldemort. It's a different approach to these sorts of things I find it incredibly intriguing how you seem to be planning to tie the Horcrux removal into helping Amber.
-Harry is gaining quite the harem already huh! He's got the twins, Yang, Pyrrha, sorta Cinder, and potentially Blake too if they manage to sit and have a civil conversation. I originally got into this fic because I was intrigued by Harry being surrounded by the twins who never really get much focus. It's cool to see that his social circle is expanding a bit now!
-Penny! Woohoo! Love that girl.
-I like Cinder's portrayal. You've honestly got the beginnings of a potential redemption for her if played correctly.
-Wow, Junior really got the short end of the stick in this fic. He always struck me as the bumbling small time guy who wasn't really evil or even bad just doing a job. It probably helped that he was usually portrayed in the show as more comical than anything else...Not so funny here...
-Juane as a mook is utterly hilarious!
-I'm not sure who you had planned for teams and such but since canon has already essentially been tossed out the window here are my suggestions for some of the compositions: Harry/Pyrrha/Yang/Ruby, Melanie/Militia/Juane/Blake.

Overall, this is a very good fic. It's been steadily improving the last few chapters and I really hope to see it continued one day!

How bad is the writer's block? Or is it just severe procrastination? (Don’t worry, I got that too)