That was a bit anti-climatic.

oh morgan.../3. not sure if that's the last chapter but thank you, truly thank you for sharing such a lovely story I enjoyed the roller coaster of a tale from start to finish. the tale of this morgan is truly a tragic one but its ending bitter sweet, may she find peace. again thank you for the story(cant say this enough haha) truly captivating.

though I am saddened by the severe lack of Noire, could have potential to be a stronger/bigger support role to Morgan. BUT I understand why it was done so, this is Morgan's tale which truly captured the struggles of our heroine which was nicely executed.

the only advice/tip I have for you is to keep writing you truly have a knack for it friend, please take care and have a good day!

PS. thank ya for the robin/tharja moments always a nugget of joy to see them intereracting!

1. depressing as fuck
2. this REALLY would not happen like ever. I'm pretty damn sure either Robin would give the gem to Chrom easily ending the conflict or Chrom would stop Lucina.

So...are you not going to put Noire in now or what?

Awesome. Now we just need morgan to kill Lucina again and for Robin to pop back up in a field somewhere. You can't trust Lucina man! She'll gut you in a half-second!

Wow...just Wow I never imagined such a great story like this would exist!Awww I hope little morgan changes the future,I'll wait for the next chapter so keep up the good work!

Ok finished this chapter, seemed like Morgan is going to be moving around a bit for now. My own prediction. But my apologies for not paying attention to what happened to Henry, my brother read my review and told me what happened to him. DAMN MY HUSBAND FOR NOT PAYING ATTENTION! Well, I guess that's something me and him have in common, huh?

Awesome Morgan action, the bloodier the better. Tharja would've been proud of her, I'm sure :3

Chon'sin would've been a good place for Morgan to hang out at. Nice strong people to protect you. Well, same for Ferox I guess. It's awesome Morgan is taking this into her own hands and fighting for her people and not being all princess like 'Aaaaah! I have to hide, lest someone find me and kill me. Sob, if only I were stronger.'
'Hello Morgan'
'Ah! Don't scare me Owain!'
'Let us ride into the sunset where i shall keep you safe from the forces of my kingdom!'
'But it's forbidden! We can never be!'
'Nonsense! I shall fight for our happiness if it is the death of me! Our love will be legend!'
'Ah ok brave knight!'

Stuff like that -_-"

But if it ended like this

'as the two ride off into the sunset, the claimed-to-be-hero sliced her throat while chuckling evilly.' "Looks like the forces of darkness has finally caught up with me. Morgan...at least it was quick. heh." and with that, he brings the dead body home to his mother, who shows her brother, who shows his daughter, who shows the world.' "We have won father!" Lucina exclaims happily!"
"Yes, but at what cost?"
"The cost of no chances of us being in a war with Ple-" Lucina thinks about how her plan may not of worked out exactly the way she thought it would. "Well...at least the fell dragon won't attack us in our life time!"
'the spirits of Robin and Tharja stab Chrom in the heart while lucina was no more than a foot away from him.' "L-Lucina...WTF?!" *Dies*
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOO"
"Shall we kill her too, my love?" Ghost Tharja asked Ghost Robin.
"Why yes, yes we shall." and with that, Lucina was brutally murdered.

*THE END*

you know, I have a bad habit of writing my own thing for other people's fics. I don't know whats wrong with me...

This story definitely has me captured in its grimy claws. I shall proceed with reading this marvelous story from here on out!

I needed to write this before I continued...

My brother comes into my room at three in the morning crying and when I asked him whats wrong, he told me he read this first chapter! I admit I laughed at him for being this sentimental about this but this is the family he chose, he's got a soft spot for his attractive stalkers, lol. But I guess I can see where he's coming from. Gawds, you made my brother a wreck. I would feel sorrier for him if he wasn't always mocking my unhealthy obsession with Henry(Don't know what our obsession is with Plegians. Probably runs in out blood.((What was Henry doing when Lucina attacked Noire anyways? He obviously wasn't watching Morgan.)) My brother's only 13 man!

Enough of my bro. Wouldn't Tharja be able to cast some sort of hex before hand if she sensed something? Like make Chrom tell them whats going on and hit him with the truth spell? I guess she must've gotten rusty over the years or something, eh? And Chrom would probably hesitate more if he was killing his best friend, not just a KER-STAB. Seriously, you made me hate Chrom for this. I'm not going to be able to look at him the same ever again XS

At least Morgan got away, for now at least. And wouldn't Plegians be reluctant to fight if Robin was killed? They didn't really want him anyways so they should be happy! Or they're just not used to being peaceful. Or they attacked Ylisse for killing a woman and two kids for no apparent reason(in their eyes)

But enough of my nit picking, this is an awesome story and I can't wait to find out what happens! I'm actually going to find out now. ;D

Nice job ! You got me hooked at your story, I always though it would end up somewhat 'like that', in the 'bad' end.
Well, good fucking job Chrom, you killed your best friend hope you're happy, on day, it will bite back.

Well, this was quite excellent. Morgan has gotten over her cheerful attitude, I presume.

Well, the idea is good. Although Lucina is OOC, that is acceptable.
Onto with your writing. A bit rushed and unrefined. But you have potential, I say!

Impressive great start can't wait for more

Well... My eyes are watery. After reading my favorite wife and daughter, along with... Well... Me, getting murdered... I'm kinda said... But this is fantastic. You have my favorite.

A good "bad" ending fanfic although you could make Morgan more terrified than what you portrayed like Chrom having the Falcion unsheathed while talking to her, just to get readers into feeling the sadness and the situation that she is in. Anyways hope you do more chapters!

Oooh...Lucina and Chrom were very ruthless in this, but understandably so? First fic I've seen that really addresses the implications of FE13's 'bad' ending. Very nice work, friend!