More please? This is really good and now im curious. :)

Dont stop writing

I really like it, it's great, and the grammar faults are nothing! I've seen many more in non-dyslexical people, so don't worry! The plot is great, keep doing the fic please :).

please update soon, I can't wait anymore ;-;
I really like your story, keep up the good work :) (and don't worry, I think you did pretty well on the sexual part)

Continueeeeed:((( pleaseeeeee xd

pls do update the chapter 5!

I like the story thus far, but I feel as though the romance and character development are being rushed. Specifically speaking, I understand that the kiss was meant to be sudden, but still I wasn't a fan of it. It felt very premature and unsatisfying for me as a reader, and left me feeling more confused than warm and fuzzy. Still this is not bad for a first publish and I think you have potential as a writer. Also the grammar mistakes aren't too bad even if you weren't dyslexic so extra kudos there. Please update regularly I look forward to following some of your works.

Am so glad that you update. The waits worth it. Did you see chapter 50? Hajime its making our yumikuri expectations come true ( well in his dark manner). Also, that sex part was very romantic.

More! Please I hope there's some good lemon after this xD

Liking the story and plot so far:) I hope chapter 4 is about them becoming one in details :D I want to read some lemon with my favorite otp yumikuri

Can't wait for the next chapter! w

Awesome chapter! Looking forward to read more!

no... please chapter 3 !

espero con ansias el siguiente capitulo.
:)

I demand you to update this. Like. Right now. As in, now. This very second.