I only have 2 questions cause i really don't understand something.
-why was harry at the cemetery facing voldy during the tournament, while he wasn't even in hogwarts at the time?
-I don't really know the time how long he is during hogwarts couldn't be more then a few months? But it really looks weird as if the gang and harry now each other far long then that with the conversations or things they say it doens't make sense.. the trust, the humor, action standing up for each other.
Even with the whole weasleys/dumbles thing getting harry, unless it's know for years during the order meetings, ehm.. then they should have done something by then.

Alright - here's my reaction. (1) STOP IT with the author's notes. YOU DO NOT HAVE TO JUSTIFY ANYTHING YOU WRITE. You're GIVING to people. Your TIME, YOUR THOUGHTFULNESS, YOUR CREATIVITY... EVERYTHING. DO NOT BE ASHAMED of anything you write. NO ONE KNOWS, other than those of us who write and contribute to this community, just how hard it is to write a good story. If you want a beta, who is good with grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. I'd be willing to help.

Regards,
the_scribbler

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Hope you update soon, it's very interesting so far.

Annnd, now I need brain bleach.

Wtf?

your story is even more screwed up than the harry potter books.

sorry but having so many people have access to your vault is dumb the point is to protect you stuff hard to do if everyone and there dog can get in the damn vault and defeats the whole purpose of having one

Thanks

Great story and I enjoyed every chapter. Looking forward how it will develope and how Mr Cross and Mr Potter will resolve their differences. Great story.

Thanks

I sWEAR IF THIS IS ANOTHER HAREM FIC I WILL MURDER SOMEBODY. That being said, have a nice day!

Awesome story so far!

I'm sure it eventually gets better but Jesus Christ, I couldn't even get half-way through the first chapter before giving up. Pretty much at the point where Harry states the fucking obvious about Hermoine crying and she just outright admits she tried to kill herself. What the actual fuck?

Pass. Hard pass.

Delacours appearing in a small scene does not in any way constitute meeting them.