Yummy! I was hoping to hear about their date ;))

this story is so cute
but I was wondering if you'll talk about natsu's muffler again or not...you know like mention some stuff about his past or smthn! '
and I was a bit confused, is this a gratsu or a natray fic?
thanks for the awesome fic :)

I Enjoy this story. Although I think it would be a touching part if you brought back in the fact that Natsu can't swim. I think that would be cute to be honest have like Natsu falling in the pool and gray saving him. I don't info thought I should mention it. Ignor it completly if you want I just had to say it sorry if I am being to in your bursiness. Sorry it was just a thought. Love the story though keep going.

I LOVE this. Also, FINALLY! A pjo fan who is also a fan of fairytale! also one who is able to come up with this perverted crap and has knowledge of other cultures! Are you me from a parallel universe?

oh you keep Lyon. I have Gray 3 :3 XD and Aww! Lyon interrupted them twice. Humph! XD

lyon why did you to ruin the almost kiss moment...

whoa. wait a minute. "soon pillow became wet with his tears." didn't he just run inside from the rain? shouldn't it be the whole bed?
aaand XD lyon's always awesome! XD
but... y d hell did he cry?

Yay another great chapter. Hehe Lyon caught them. Please update soo _

Gray QUIT RUNNING AWAY! I knew Lyon was going to catch them! Grays gonna be all embarrassed! cant wait I love this

Lol I just knew Lyon was gonna catch them!
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Lol I love this story it's sweet!

why did gray ran... is he too suprise that natsu kiss him...

I love this story so much! I loved how Lyon was the kind older brother that still picked on Gray. Oh and I just loved Lucy's and Erza's charaters they were just so funny! Please up-date as soon as you can.

great chapter I lov it _ can't wait for more. Good Luck !

Omg I love this story, when will you update?

aww.. gray you are cute too... and they kiss again!