Love this story so much, you've developed all of the characters so well and its always so great reading about them as a family. Love the connection Rachel has with all of her kids, you write each relationship so well. Glad Rachel found out what was wrong with Amy in the end and they got it sorted. Can't wait to read about them going to Florida xxxxxxxxx

"NOT wanting to make sure it wasn't Jake"? I don't think that is what you meant. its a really good story but I think it needs proofreading

you have not "wrote" anything. you have "written" the story and beause it is the children of Rachel Mason. its Mason's. and there "are" going to be changes. not wanting to offend you, just hoping these corrections help

Such a nice to surprise to see you'd updated this fic, I've missed this story. It was really nice how you carried on with the previous storyline. Poor Holly though must've been horrible for her with Rachel being like that but glad they made up in the end. Loved the bits at the end where they were all a proper family again. Hope you update this one again xxxxxxxx

Please update soon

This was absolutely amazing. So pleased Richard is okay but feel so sorry for them both loosing the baby. Great update xxxxxxxx

This was so good, hope Richard is okay. Can't wait for more xxxxxxx

Loved this, it was nice them all being together. You could maybe show Holly turning into a more shy and quiet girl, like she was at the beginning of Rachel masons children xxxxxxxx

Aww poor holly, that's so horrible. Glad she told Rachel in the end though. Please update soon xxxxxxx

So pleased you updated, loved this so much. Loved the Rachel/Holly and Rachel/Sophie bits xxxxxxxx

Can't believe I've only just found this fic. It's absolutely amazing hun, love it so much.

I will definitely be adding it to my alerts.

Please update really soon xxx

Oh no, poor Amy! That's so horrible. Rachel making them all go for a walk reminds me of something my Mum would do! Loved this, can't wait for more xxxxxx

This was so sweet. I can definitely imagine Holly sleeping downstairs with the dog. Can't wait for more xxxxxxx

Aww loved this so much. Loved the bits with Rachel and Amy. Can't wait for more xxxxxx

The bit was Amy was so funny, she must have been in for quite a shock in the morning! Poor Jake, sure Rachel will be able to help him out