this makes me happy and exsited its really good:)

WOW! This is my second time reading it and it is as great as the first!

I thought that it was Tortuga, not a togruta.

This story,I like. Check your other stories ,I will.

This story,I more stories,you will,I hope:)

Like this story,I more,I hope you will:)

The friction between those 2 are getting to the point where its stupid and immature. Somethings aren't even worth getting upset over and those that are you just seem to fix them in 2 paragraph almost like nothing ever happened. Kind of a waste of a good idea. This story has very nice plot but poor execution almost like it didn't live up to its potential

Yeap. Like i said in the previous chapter you are progressing the relationship wayyyyy too fast. I would love to have abit of build up. Like some awkward moments between them and not have them progressed from meeting each other to falling in love in 2 days and can't live without each other in 6 months let alone asuka forgiving anakin so easily with little persuasion on the padme matter

Love the story and your writing but i can't help but feel that you did things too fast, i mean at thus point they already sorr of confess and it gets a little dry without anticipation and sort of like a cliffhanger feeling

OMG! I loved this story! Please post more chapters for the sequel! I can't wait to read more! 3

Holy crap. this chapter was intense, and it was fantastic!

YES! This chapter was so good! I enjoyed every part of it and can't wait to keep reading

I liked this chapter and the story as a whole so far!

Just The Way You Are...Billy Joel.

This story is beautiful! I wish I could write like this, with this much emotion. My work is a bit darker...You have great talent!

Good job. I've liked the idea of Anikin & Ahasoka scince I was little, but i never had the brains to pursue the idea until recently. Your story was the first i read, and it was great! Keep up the good work!