brilliant, absolutely brilliant

Rereading...
I'm not usually a fan of Transformers, but I am making an exception for this story and Adjustment of Plans. This is a wonderful May/November romance among mechs; I love the way you depict love among non-biological entities. And I'm a cat person. You have that down too.
I know it has been a long time, but I'd love to see those rough drafts. Thanks for some great reading.

;-; Greatness. I loved this a lot and I'm happy you wrote it! Thank you :D

Ohhhh I have just read this one and I love it! The delicate civilization you build for both of them... Well, most of original fiction writers don't do the half of it for their own worlds. It seems so effortless to fantasize about the previous life of Song. I hope you got the time to upload the parallel others... and the continuation of the main story. If it takes longer than Adjustement it doesn't hurt, I would wait for it. Pretty please?

I can say that I couldn't force my eyes to leave the screen. Your writing style is a unique one that is quite capturing. Loved this! Please keep up the good work. :D

I loved this story, definately one I am gonna re-read plenty of times. Just as a suggestion for another story like this one you could do steeljaw and Blaster's story from an adjustment of plans

You have an amazing amount of detail and emotion in this, and I would absolutely love to read more from this AU when you have time to post it :)
It is nice to hear more about Soundwave's history, this part especially since it was alluded to multiple times in Adjustment of Plans.

I need more background! More!

What a wonderful tale! To see the early days of these characters gives a better understanding of their future actions.

:D Awesome job! Love the emotions and the descriptions here! There were a couple of typo's I noticed, but nothing major. Again, AWESOME JOB!

I am sooo in love with this story! Thank you

Very good character building. I expect the sequel will be as food as this opening is.

Oh man, reading this after An Adjustment to Plans makes me really really sad. I never really thought about how big a impact Ravage's death had and actually reading it makes me wanna cry ;w; This was wonderfully written. I just saw a couple things literally, just Song being called Sound wave near the middle and Ravage being called Ratchet but it was a amazing read otherwise. I look forward to the next chapter of your main fix :'D

I wish I could help you find a program that worked well especialoy when you deal with a world like transformers where words will ot be found in the dictionary.

Please do take your time.

This story had eme intears. I would love to see anything you would care to share in the adjustment of plans verse; especially more of the story.

I love your background for Soundwave, so much. (And am now that much more upset over the death of Ravage in An Adjustment of Plans.)

No matter how long it takes, I would LOVE to see the other stories you have in this continuity. (And Adjustment.)