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   Thrullsmash chapter 8 . 9/5/2015 I like it |
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/18/2015 Pot. New chapter plz I am begging |
| httydismylife chapter 7 . 10/10/2014 I really love your character 'Viper', please hurry and write another chapter! I can't bear this waiting anymore! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/1/2014 Awesome! Kareoke! |
| heartofglass99 chapter 7 . 8/2/2014 AWESOME! Thanks for updating, and I love this story! (: |
| heartofglass99 chapter 6 . 8/2/2014 Great! (: Yet another amazing chapter. |
| heartofglass99 chapter 5 . 8/2/2014 Haha great! |
| heartofglass99 chapter 4 . 8/2/2014 Intersting OC's! |
| heartofglass99 chapter 3 . 8/2/2014 ooh nice chapter! |
| heartofglass99 chapter 2 . 8/2/2014 Haha cool! |
| heartofglass99 chapter 1 . 8/2/2014 Ooh nice! |
| sasukeXnarutoforever chapter 1 . 8/1/2014 Your grammar is subpar and so is your narrative style, your character isn't interesting in the slightest, your over-the-top attempt at romance is grating, and that's not how DNA recombination would work. Although your story is an overused trope it could have potential if it were well written. It isn't well written. |
| NinjaGeek chapter 6 . 5/31/2014 Oh. My. God. That was nuts! Please update! |
| NinjaGeek chapter 2 . 5/31/2014 I'm laughing my ass off. I love this story! :) |
| JELLY FACE chapter 2 . 4/27/2014 AWESOME STORY! ...UUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEE! JELLY FACE SIGNING OFF! 0-0 *SALUTS, AND RUNS AWAY...AGAIN* |
