Reviews for It Goes Without Saying |
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luxartisan chapter 1 . 8/21/2017 Love this. I'm a big fan of present tense writing and had no trouble at all with it. In fact, it always makes a story feel more "real" to me. The characterizations felt right and although I'm not a long-time fan of the series (having just watched it years after its rise in popularity), I enjoyed the dynamic of these two characters and of all the possible pairings, this is the only one that made sense to me. I'm pretty particular that way and about the writing I choose to praise. This pairing works quite nicely and your writing does, as well. |
shouldbesleeping chapter 1 . 1/27/2016 Is it ever too late to review? Hmm, oh well. These two have such an interesting and flexible dynamic, I like way you chose you go with this direction. I'm no expert at writing, but this seemed just fine to me. Looking forward to explore what else you've written. :) |
Satan'sLittleSiren chapter 1 . 8/16/2015 ASDFGHJKLQWERTYUIOPZXCVBNM! That was so cute! |
cloks chapter 1 . 4/19/2015 AaaaHHHHhhh my heart (not to mention my lady boner) I look forward to your stories 3 |
cannibalisticReaper chapter 1 . 3/31/2015 This was lovely, be proud of yourself c: |
faerieinlove chapter 1 . 2/1/2015 omg this is super goood 3 keep up the work! :D |
Moonhawk88903 chapter 1 . 12/10/2014 Awww this was really sweet! |
featherdusters chapter 1 . 8/24/2014 this is all that i ever wanted out of a makoharu fanfiction this is beautifully written thank you for this thank u so much my life is complete |
Mi-chan785 chapter 1 . 8/12/2014 Beautifully written. I like how you depicted their characters, I think you caught them quite well! I could imagine their reactions just like that! It took me a bit to get used to the style of writing, I'm not used to present time. But after 2-3 paragraphs, it was alright D I also like how you described their first time. Because, unlike other fanfics, they really seem like doing it the first time! Trying out things, failing, redoing it and stuff. Very good! And Nagisa... NAGISA! I laughed. Loudly. Nothing more to say xDD Good story, gave me good feelings D |
Hikary Sanoko chapter 1 . 7/25/2014 Beautifully written! |
pikaccino chapter 1 . 6/5/2014 I would have enjoyed this more IF I DIDN'T READ THE DIALOGUE IN THE VOICES OF 50% OFF! But other than that, this was awesome! You have a gift for writing! |
WolfPacFaan chapter 1 . 5/12/2014 Cute one-shot. Very nice. Loved it even. |
Bishiebunny chapter 1 . 12/6/2013 Lovely...and funny! |
Solider of Lucifer chapter 1 . 12/3/2013 Love it |
rrgh chapter 1 . 11/2/2013 it's the sad girl from your no. 6 fic i also really love your free! fics ok makoharu is my otp and so is nezushi and you write them bot well lik well good job you are success 3 3 3 |