It's quite alright, however, the constant use of fuck makes it lose its impact.

Shit man! is this all gay ass fanfics? Well.. I uh yeah I'm on the wrong side of fanfiction, fuck me... Well fuck this, and Fuck all that.. And fuck the walls, and fuck everything, fuck, fuck, fuck shit, fuck. Fuck everywhere, fuck life, fuck your hats!

Hey there!
Wow, I read all 3 of your stories in two days, It was really awesome. Maybe I should put a separate comment for each. Yeah, I think that's what I'll do.

SO! Law and Kidd. I'm starting to really love them, even if I don't know them well yet (still at Punk Hazard here, taking my sweet time ). I really love how you described these characters (actually all of your characters). They are so true, complicated and raw. I can see you try to adapt the description to the way the character thinks, feels. And you do it very well I have to say. A brutal Kidd but discovering his own soft side with time. An hurt Law that struggles with his mind every time.

Their relationship is awesome. Maybe a bit to similar to the two previous one in the process, as in: the lust, the start of feelings, hard moment to pass and then reconstruction without anymore masks. But to be honest I quite love this scheme. It's thrilling and very interesting. In my point of view, you should go a bit further in their relationship. Yes they are back together and in love and all, but I like to see more: their everyday life, eventfull or even uneventfull moments.

Also, I really like the universe you created. That Galleyla Company is very interesting, the gang/government environment is captivating and I would love to see more. Now that Joker is gone, how will the fight for his territory go? What will happen with the Blackbeards? The Government? And can Mihawk and Shanks go back together? Aha if one day you write a sequel, I will on first line to read it.

Thanks a lot for those really nice moments I had reading your story, and I hope to read you soon again!

Zafyra

nice story! love it.

Hello :)
We are two Girls and we both read your fanfiction. (After A recommended it) And we fell in love with your series, with your style and your Pairings. Hell, we are making references all the time. We are more than impressed by your stories and we hope that you continue the series. You are amazing.
Bye,
YA

This story was delicious from the start to end! I just love the way you write. And I love how your stories connect to each other, it's not something you see often.

I love your series of Grand Line City stories. It's well written, despite some spelling and grammar error. I really could't tear my eyes away from it. Looking forward to more of these stories . Will you be writing one on shanks abs nihwak?

Just had a thought, since he has plenty of rich friends; they could help him. He could work out a job with them and get money, right? Besides, if it's a couple of millions that he has to pay then his friends could easily set that up. 500 grand for doing something, it doesn't matter the value because I don't think the contract said that, anyways; Law's pretty stupid in this fiction.

I love this story, it soo hot. And the story is wonderful

I absolutely loved your story. You took time for bringing all the atmosphere and the violence through characters. Kidd was very scary and Law so miserable. It really was great, the relationship between the two of them was disturbing then it's been lightening. I was so eager to read next chapter each time! I just wish we had more developpement with other couples such as Luffy/Nami or Sanji/Zoro but it was all great anyway.
Thanks so much for having took all this time for writing!

AMAZING! 'nough said B)

Wow, just wow. Some parts I didn't like cuz either I was embarrassed to read it or annoyed when comparing it to their characters. But it was overall good. So glad the ending was happy. I liked the suits reference in one of the chapters. Very nice

AAAAAAAAHHHHHH!
*screams of joy at the finished story*
It's been such a journey!

I absolutely love this series!

one of the best parts of finishing this story is that the very last sentence basically summarizes the whole story, just shut up and fuck me.

l love it