Love it please write more

This story caught me by surprise. I didn't think I would like it but the chapter story makes it work whereas the stand alone one shot leaves a lot of questions. I am disappointed that they never have sex in the story, although I agree that while it would have been primal and super hot if it had continued after the gala, it was important to address why they were having sex, as Felicity believed. I don't understand why Oliver seems upset and cold with her afterwards. That would have been a prime opportunity to at least tell her an inkling of what he felt. When it happens again, I get that she was injured and tired but he finally tells her how he feels and then they just go to sleep. For me, the end of the story felt anticlimactic without completing a love scene. But overall, I did completely like this story right off the bat!

Slow clap... I absolutely love your rant at the beginning of this chapter. Ok gonna finish with reading this story now... ;)

Oliver falling of the salmon ladder was by far the best part... I very much liked the ending especially with all of the JL tie ins but it does bother me that Alice never knew the truth. They saw how devastated Thea was when she learned she was lied to about her parentage, I kind of hoped that in the ending vignette they would final tell her

I can’t tell you how many tines I’ve read this and I just love it beyond words. Best story ever! Ever written in fact! Wish it was full book and I’d read it constantly.

This was such a wonderful read! I binged read the whole thing in one go! I loved every minute of it and thought you made a good point when Felicity freaked out about becoming a mother and having her life completely change. Why is it only fair that it's okay for guys to do that and not women? Anyways I loved your story and thought your characterisation was spot on! I can't wait to read more of your stuff!

This epilogue was awesome. You nailed the snapshots and I loved the anguish and triumph. You portrayed this very well. Great job.

It makes me sad that they never told Alice about Tommy. But it was a sweet ending. Great story :)

I absolurly adored this and stayed up waaay too late binge reading. worth It!

that was so freaking cute! i loved the whole story!

One of my all time favorites, no question. This made me scream because I was so happy and it was SO unique. You did an amazing job, I applaud you.

love her initials ARQ. Not quite sure if you meant it to be a subtle reference to Robbie Amell who was in the movie ARQ

Loved it...well done :D

Oliver is enjoying this situation a little too much...hahah

I loved this story! It was beautifully written. The last chapter was perfect. I laughed out loud at Alice knowing Oliver was the Green Arrow. Then laughed more thinking about the idea that Felicity and Oliver probably spent the next couple years trying to get her to stop calling him 'Green Daddy' in public. Amazing!