It was ok.

Oh my god this was so adorable I don't even know I just you managed to capture James and Lily perfectly and Sirius describing them is what makes air, life is very good when I am reading your fanfiction, and I am sorry I am rambling but I am just too light headed after reading this to actually give you a proper review and ohmygod i feel like i am going to cry rainbow tears of happiness

Sooo cute..siriusly :)

This is really good! I really like it :)

Cute (: I like Sirius's POV, it's enlightening (:

Very cute. I love stories in which Sirius is written as an intelligent human being.

Aw really enjoyed this clever and different take

Awwwww...soo cute!

Awwwwww...I love that! And the words were so professional! Great job

this was CUTE.

[I like reviews... you can give reviews... interesting...] this cracked me up XD

Oh my Merlin! This is so adorable and I love the fact that you made it from Sirius' perspective. This is Almost exactly how I imagined James and Lily together. Love this!

Absolutely loved it. Sirius' secret happiness for his best friend was very much in character and I particularly enjoyed the sprinkling of humor throughout. And what good Marauder fanfiction doesn't have a joke or two somewhere? I enjoyed his description of James as his best friend but also deemed it important enough to share with us that he was the one to blow up Fitch's office.

I especially love how you've had the Marauders be the ones to finally force James and Lily to act on their feelings for one another. They certainly took their time and so I can understand why Sirius was so infuriated! Now I did notice one or two spelling errors which you might want to look over but in general both spelling and grammar was well done, which always makes for an easier read.

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Magnifique!

I was the one to send you the prompt and can you imagine how happy I am that you put it on here, too? Because I love the way you wrote it. I think you can capture Sirius' character really nicely and I love your writing style. Keep going!