Great story, keep it up!

That was pretty good. There were a few points where you fumbled with the grammar, and whatnot, but none of the errors were big enough that it seriously detracted from the chapter. I /do/ have a few issues with the end, when they run into the Shadow Heartless. Edd, of all people, should know that those things aren't normal, or even earthlike, so for him to chase after one in an effort to "speak to it" seemed kinda... meh. Still, I'll look forward to reading the next chapter a little later. I'm a little disappointed that there are only two chapters for this.

i really liked this chapter, but i cant help but feel like the story is moving just a little fast. it just seems the eds got to use the keyblades to fight heartless to soon. i dont know, maybe im just complaining for no reason, and the story will explain itself later. regardless of my own personal opinion, i can't wait to read more.

For ed i see a monster themed keyblade double d should get what looks like a scientific theory and eddy should get something money related

Huh? this is interesting? How did they get their keyblade's in the first place?

Questions questions... I guess I'll have to find out later...

Interesting story so far.

This seems like a excellent story and it has a lot of potential and also like how you put their stats, weapons, new moves and ETC.

cool story dude.

this was fairly interesting, i absolutely love kingdom hearts and ed, edd, and eddy, so reading them both together just saves time, i love your other stories so i fully support this one and hope you continue this story and make it as awesome as your other ones.