Reviews for The Tragedy of Perfection: Feelings Disappear
Cherryyogurt chapter 1 . 9/1
Please please update I’m super invested. This is so good!
XYZArtemis chapter 5 . 4/22/2019
Wow, this is really good!
CelicaChick chapter 5 . 12/2/2016
Heartbreaking. Leo all shut up inside himself. Love the story. Hope you will continue it!
CelicaChick chapter 2 . 12/2/2016
Omg I cannot stop reading. Love the way Raph is depicted. Oh so observant of his big brother. And of course I love how leo is written up!
CelicaChick chapter 1 . 12/2/2016
This was awesome!
JoinTheWeb chapter 5 . 11/22/2016
Graaaaa please continue! I NEED to know what happened next!
ThardyTeasy chapter 5 . 2/25/2016
Love this history!
Ronie chapter 5 . 4/12/2015
Great so far, but are you ever going to finish?
Gwydion chapter 5 . 3/20/2015
I really enjoyed this. I know it hasn't been updated in a while, but what you have so far is excellently written and perfectly tense. You could feel the unease and tension, both from Leo's odd behavior and from everyone else trying to deal with it. It was the perfect tone and atmosphere, and I'm only sad I've come to it's current end. I look forward to reading more should you decide to continue!
yukio87 chapter 5 . 11/8/2014
PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY I WANNA KNOW IF LEO IS GONNA BE OK AND IF RAPH, MIKEY AND DONNIE ARE GONNA FIGURE OUT WHAT HAPPENED TO THEIR OLDER BROTHER AND COME TO SAVE HIM? PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW THAT...PLEASE
Sairey13 chapter 5 . 9/25/2014
Did Leo ever thought about running away when he was young, whenever he made a mistake that makes him believe that his family would be better off without him? Does he ever thought about leaving the family to this very day? What other dark secrets does he holds within his heart?
SleepingSeeker chapter 5 . 7/7/2014
Excellent addition to this story! I'm so loving this! You know I adore a strict Splinter - and that scene between Leo and Shredder, when he came down was so intense. Just wonderful! I can't wait for the next update!

I wish you luck with your training! And want to thank you for your sacrifice!
Crystal Violeta chapter 5 . 7/6/2014
Interesting.
Please up date soon!
BubblyShell22 chapter 5 . 7/6/2014
Wow. An awesome chapter for sure. Yep, truth serum doesn't sound like a good thing at all from the sounds of it, and I have a feeling Leo's going to say stuff he shouldn't. Loved the flashback as well and how Splinter punished him. Yes, I can see why Splinter would do it, but I also see how Leo had good intentions. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update. Good luck in your military training.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
BubblyShell22 chapter 4 . 7/6/2014
Oh man, this definitely isn't good. Leo's in for it now. I just hope his brothers can come and help him out of this mess soon. I liked how Raph confronted Splinter and demanded answers. Seems to me they're owed some from their father. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
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