The Priest must have left the mike on...

I come across this story every so often and every time I read it and love it more it is just so good and funny and well written plus the bit at the end where he says "father we were married both times" or something similar makes me wet my self every single time well done

This is hilarious and the quote at the top is funny aswell.

I think maybe telling a two (or three) year old about a baby sibling before you start showing is a little much. The time goes slower for them, and they either get impatient or forget all about it. Or you could be like my mom, I was 15 and I asked her (she was getting big) if she was pregnant. She told me "no!" However, a baby brother showed up a few months later...I don't know what she was thinking!

Very hilarious and very entertaining

Thank you for sharing. Missed reviewing during the contest :(. Loved the last line.

The unexpected POV changes were confusing. They prevented me from finishing the rest of the story.

Sorry. *shrugs*

Love this!

Very sweet and cute. I have the warm and toasties.

Oh my god this was so awesome! I awww'd and laughed and teared up. Good work.

Loved your story. Would love to have you expand it into a full story and see what their life was like during those years. You got my vote.

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I LOVED this one! Sweet, witty and full of fun! Give me these characters in a longer fic, PLEASE!?

Awwww very cute and well done. Glad they got it "right" this time. Good luck!

This was adorable! I really enjoyed how Bella announced the pregnancies each time. Those were great!
Thanks for writing and good luck in the contest!