Oh my goodness, this was downright adorable and amusing and sweet and my gosh; you are a fantastic writer. So in love with this story :)

sweet, good descriptions all around, a lovely collection building to a delightful ending!
very well written!

Love it!

As always, I loved this. The ending line was so perfect. I love the natural progression you wrote, with each time making them closer and closer both metaphorically and physically. Well done.

Sweet and sexy! Lovely combination and writing. I love the line: " For someone who apparently did not sleep, Sherlock did it very well." Funny, interesting, and well-written!

*INCOHERENT SCREAMING* heeeeeeelp I need air!

"And there, shooting out the cracked open window, went his life. Byeeee." this part made my laugh! XD

I don't know what to say, that i haven't say before. But i really love it, you are amazing, love the way you describe their relationship, it just brilliant!

takecare! :)

Oh that was masterly! the slow build up - the final scene that told all without need for graphic description...Wonderful!

Well done. I like the progression of the relationship.

You had me a bit worried at the ending but then it was a happy ending so I'm happy as well! Thank you!

'It had been a while since he had last done it and John found himself conscious, in his semi-conscious state, of all those old dilemmas of morning breath and pillow-creased cheeks and blood rushes to odd places.' - I love this sentence. It just sums up the whole.

'His sigh was heavy and he shifted his head, stroking his jaw over John's hair. Just once.' - Oh Sherlock! Just once, mind you, bless.

'His guest was in a t-shirt and black boxer shorts (John's, he realised – was nothing sacred?!)' - No John, dont be silly. A very telling description of their relationship, sneakily snuck in. Well done.

The explanation of Johns nightmares is brilliant. A lot of people have John down as one big mess of night terrors, but you have done it very well.

And cheeky Sherlock at the end! Well, dont mind if I do!

An exquisite piece from beginning to end. The journey is steadily well covered and explains itself completely. Love it! One of my favourite favourites. Thank you.

LOL! You don't waste any time. When you say Johnlock you mean it! Great stories and number six . . . well it's very sexy. :)

Brilliant! Loved it!

Really nice.

:o I honestly thought that the one time that he didn't was going to be very sad and pain filled. I honestly thought exactly the opposite. As usual, I loved it! I will have to read this like
.. every day.