Reviews for Breathe |
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Aiyhana K chapter 1 . 12/18/2019 The most wonderful moment I’ve read between them. |
tmntsilverness chapter 1 . 1/1/2015 Please finish this story I do really like but I am also a fan of Apriltello and Leorai. I think its a great story, 5 out of 5 stars for me.(I know that its not a like rating website on stories but i feel it is 5/5(: ) |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2014 Really like this story. to tmntfan4ever: You don't have to be sarcastic. XD |
tmntfan4ever chapter 1 . 5/5/2014 damn it...now i'm an apritello fan...:/ |
thegirlwholived chapter 1 . 3/1/2014 I LOVE it |
Blue Seidr chapter 1 . 1/20/2014 Beautiful |
Tori-Bird627 chapter 1 . 9/4/2013 I liked it! I thought it was sweet. |
Eldestof5 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013 this was really good. i really liked how you ended it with the hint of thoughtfulness. I love light-hearted stories but adding real world things like how you or I would feel, struggling between whether I should be focusing on finding my dad and trying to figure out feelings for a guy too? I like when people add realistic qualities. :) Also you have excellent grammer, thank you for that. Keep writing! You're doing great! Eldest |
Pokemon fan chapter 1 . 8/24/2013 The way you described April's feelings about Donnie is perfect! I think she's aware that Donnie loves her, but she's just not in the mood to be in a relasionship because her dad got kidnapped. |
sfss chapter 1 . 8/24/2013 The ending was amazing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2013 i thought it was very cute. Donnie and april forever |
Indigo Tides chapter 1 . 8/22/2013 It was... *takes a deep breath*... BEAUTIFUL, MY DARLING! I really liked the way Donnie acted in this. It was just so... him, if ya know what I mean. Overall, very nicely done. I don't know if you're planning on continuing with this, but please do! I wanna read more! :) |
Iamthatawesome chapter 1 . 8/22/2013 Wow... That was REALLY good! |
FrostyCrescent chapter 1 . 8/21/2013 Cute story! I absolutely LOVE Donnie's crush on April. Its so...adorable! |
Obviously not writing chapter 1 . 8/21/2013 Sweet story. I think April should sing in the show. |