Reviews for Breathe
Aiyhana K chapter 1 . 12/18/2019
The most wonderful moment I’ve read between them.
tmntsilverness chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
Please finish this story I do really like but I am also a fan of Apriltello and Leorai. I think its a great story, 5 out of 5 stars for me.(I know that its not a like rating website on stories but i feel it is 5/5(: )
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
Really like this story.
to tmntfan4ever: You don't have to be sarcastic. XD
tmntfan4ever chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
damn it...now i'm an apritello fan...:/
thegirlwholived chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
I LOVE it
Blue Seidr chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Beautiful
Tori-Bird627 chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
I liked it! I thought it was sweet.
Eldestof5 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
this was really good. i really liked how you ended it with the hint of thoughtfulness. I love light-hearted stories but adding real world things like how you or I would feel, struggling between whether I should be focusing on finding my dad and trying to figure out feelings for a guy too?
I like when people add realistic qualities. :)

Also you have excellent grammer, thank you for that.
Keep writing! You're doing great!

Eldest
Pokemon fan chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
The way you described April's feelings about Donnie is perfect! I think she's aware that Donnie loves her, but she's just not in the mood to be in a relasionship because her dad got kidnapped.
sfss chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
The ending was amazing!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
i thought it was very cute. Donnie and april forever
Indigo Tides chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
It was... *takes a deep breath*... BEAUTIFUL, MY DARLING!
I really liked the way Donnie acted in this. It was just so... him, if ya know what I mean. Overall, very nicely done. I don't know if you're planning on continuing with this, but please do! I wanna read more! :)
Iamthatawesome chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Wow... That was REALLY good!
FrostyCrescent chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Cute story! I absolutely LOVE Donnie's crush on April. Its so...adorable!
Obviously not writing chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Sweet story. I think April should sing in the show.