I like the changes you made! It was fun reading this fic again! The DM/HG and GW/BZ party was an interesting twist!

Super great story, and definitely a great first attempt at smut!

For anyone reading through the comments and wondering what patafrite is talking about. At one stage this story contained a pregnancy plot line. A few years down the line i decided to stop being so cliche and went back to just keep it fun.

The opinion of the character was that an abortion was not an option because she loved her child already. And so her thoughts reflected that. Whether or not my opinions aligned with hers, you will never know because when I write i try and put my characters behaviour first and leave my opinion out of it.

Having seen more of the world since then i realise that this topic is particularly triggering for both sides of the arguement so im gonna apologise for raising it and just say that it no longer exists in this story.
Peace and love guys, happy reading
The author xxx

Patfrite in the comment section: everyone has an opinion on what counts as life and what does not. For her, the moment you conceive, it already counts as a life so please don’t preach what you believe.

Omg. I’d love it! You write lemmon like no one else, I thought or would like to the last scene with Blaise-Ginny would be a full swinger mode. But it’s amazing. Thanks for sharing!

Wow

So... I really did like your story... until the moment Hermione got pregnant. First, that's very cliché in fanfiction, second... She takes 5 mins to decide that she wants to keep the child. That's not Hermione. Abortion is not a murder, your words really really shocked me and I can't help feeling awful for the women you point out. I never needed to abort because I have a good contraception, but reading words like abort murder, shock me. A foetus IS NOT a baby ! Human life isn't superior to others, I don't see why it would be a crime to abort when we kill insects and animals all the time. We even eat eggs... If you kill a spider it's like murder, because it's born. The foetus isn't a baby, you don't murder anyone. Really, you shocked me. I suggest you to grow up.

Furthermore, Hermione Granger isn't someone who would decide to continue the pregrancy at this age without thorough thinking. She probably would abort, she is not the kind of girl who puts hold on her life at 19 years old. And why would she need to put hold on her career for years ? So, good mummy stays home while daddy works ? I thought we were on 21st century...

This was so hot turned sweet turned hot again with a Blinny bonus! Draco’s rant on Ron was so spot on as was his shredding of Lavender. I wondered why he didn’t go off on Ron again after he tripped Hermione but he probably had other things he was thinking about. Great story and I’ll be reading more of your stuff for sure!

I am not going to say that this is NSFW because well I didn't read it at work.
I read it in a meeting. One with our city council, city staff, and other members of our community.
I would say that this is not something to ready if you are in a meeting like this, with a previous medical condition that causes difficulty in breathing, with the aforementioned people aware of said condition.
Because I almost had an ambulance called on me.

If that doesn't describe the vividness of this, I don't know how better... GREAT WORK!

I need a cold shower after this chapter. The visuals, the emotional stimulation were excellent.

Reading this again and have decided Draco's monologue in this chapter is perhaps the best Ron bash in fanfic. Spot on criticisms of Ron and so gratifying to read.

Hoooolyyyy mother. Chapter 2 is the most fantastic snap in Z formation. Go Draco. Way to act like a true man, holy friggin crap.

I love this story, great story but no one did anything about tripping Hermione hard enough she broke bones and was pregnant at the time!

Thanks for sharing your story, I am looking forward to reading others.

This chapter was hilarious and awesome! Thank you.