Good story. I like some drama stories every once in a while.

Chrom is a bastard, and damn Sumia. I can never forgive them. Poor Robin.

That was good story very heart-rending and well told. Not the ending I would have gone with but good all the same.

Baka Robin and baka Cordelia for not realizing there daughter was Severa at first. Though Robin has unknowingly screwed up right in front of his very observant child.

So Robin and Cordelia were both struggling over their lost love as they tried to make their relationship work. Tricky thing to do with your love, but at least Robin and Cordelia pulled through as they finally moved on.

Though the whole roof thing and her consider jumping off is a shocker, I am glad to see Robin knew how to stop such thoughts before it got any worse. Even gave her a true kiss that showed how much he loved her and now proposing to Cordelia in the halls. Not the most romantic timing, but it'll do.

Nice trick you pulled there, making me think there was something going on. yet I respect Robin in your story had the manners and honor not to take advantage of Cordelia's weak moment. That is what truly separates real men from boys with lack of self control in life to be honest.

Though Robin is gonna be quite busy keeping a certain sweet tooth thief's mouth shut. At least he and Cordelia plan on seeing each other more.

Poor Robin and Cordelia, it really must hurt seeing the one you love the most being married off. Worse if it's to your best friend of all people, but at least Cordelia and Robin found comfort in each other. Even though neither initially thought of sleeping together, having enough alcohol in their systems can make anyone consider screwing each others brains out.

Plus they seem to be having a small spark of possible attraction making it easier to be comfortable with the idea of being together.

This story was made to make me cry
Loved it but the tears made it hard to read through

I WANT THAT STORY. :3

Owain. Because I was told not to.

I love grima Cordelia stories though... Not that I've read any :(

Very good job! A very well-written fan-fic. I especially loved the section when Severa dropped the bomb on her parents about their future actions.

The fan-fic did have some moments that seemed a bit too much. The scene where Sumia describes Robin/Grima destroying the ring seems a bit overdone due to the detail of the single tear but you could probably write it off as Sumia's imagination. Overall 4.5/5

Very good

3 Chapters into this story, and it's the darkest romance story I've read on this site. Yet I can't stop myself from reading. I mean, of all the Robin x Cordelia fan-fictions I've read, this one is most definitely the best and my personal favorite because of how it captures my emotions and brings me a large amount of joy at the end of each chapter. Hats off to you, sir. An amazing piece of literature, keep up the great work.

You know, I always liked Cordelia, which is why I decided to have my MU marry her (Aside from red-haired Morgan, of course), but the fact that she had feeling for Chrom always bothered me. These three chapters make their relationship feel much better and were very well written. So, this is my new headcanon, haha!