This was such a lovely one-shot, I really enjoyed the way you write in short sentences filled with each lifetime's stories, and the ending was such a beautiful one! I loved it! :D

I think that was the perfect ending! At last, a happy one for them. They deserve it. :) thanks for sharing!

Thank you so much for updating . I loved it

Please have Merlin save her...I want to read more of this story. Please update whenever you have the time

I like your style, probably because the short sentences packed with emotions are very similar to how I write. The dialogue is also spot on, I love the line about being the authors of their own stories. Overall, I'd love to see this continued, could be save her? Would he? What happened to lead up to this point? I'm impressed that this is your first story!

Hmm, interesting start so far! I'm intrigued to see how Merlin would save Morgana if she's jumped to her death, but I'm sure it'll be great! Good opening chapter, I hope the next one's a bit longer! Can't wait for the next one! :)