Well Done.

Wow. This is like what 2K Marin did for the BioShock sequel, even though it isn't made by the same people but the writing is so good that you honestly can't tell the difference, as far as I'm concerned, this is canon to the three games (and even that book, have you read that?) and is a very welcome addition. Me and my niece played through all the games and read the book, and I think I'll let her read this when she is older lol

Thank you. This story was so heartfelt and sweet, I loved it. You really did Elizabeth and Eleanor justice in this story and I'm so glad I got to read it.

I can't express how much I appreciate that this ended with a happy ending. Also props to the foreshadowing for it with the Twin's talk about Fairy Tales.

FWIW, I could see Eleanor being aesexual by choice because of the way Sophia brought her up. It was pretty clear from the audio diaries in Bs2 that she wanted her daughter to totally subsume the biological with the intellectual, so I could see Eleanor growing up with a somewhat detached view of sexuality as being mostly a biological process associated with reproduction and not really understanding attraction and desire.

Of course his is an Eleanor who has spent over a decade free of Rapture, so she must have picked up /some/ stuff. However, yeah, I think she'd have a difficult time letting herself feel desire, subconsciously viewing it as a weakness and self-indulgence.

That was one of the most amazing story I've ever read! You just introduced me to a ship I had no idea I wanted to read about, so thank you. Damn I wish this all story could be canon now!

Wow could not put this down. There were a few mistakes like using a Elizabeth's name instead of Eleanor's repeatedly throughout the story, some really confusing imagery, and as much conflict as I expected. But I really enjoy the sequences what she dreamed of other worlds in other Elizabeth's.

Awesome story

-Eleanor X Elizabeth!

Yes!

One of my favorite stories to date. I love everything. From the great development between Eleanor and Elizabeth, to the interactions between the Luteces. I should've wrote something 2 years ago when I first found this story. I wish you released more of your work.

This is a very well written story. Elizabeth and Eleanor's comedy of errors led into a truly moving portrayal of love, and the relationships between l of the characters were believable and felt very human. Even the Lutece twins were in character, and that's difficult to do without portraying them as virtually the same person without any defining personality traits. There were a few spelling and punctuation errors, but nothing that detracted from the story. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this!

It was absolutely great.

And... Thermal clips? Really?

Not sure why, but I keep imagining Elizabeth as Korra and Eleanor as Asami when visualizing the narrative in my head. Weird.

This was a beautiful story, if a bit sad at the end :) I think the epilogue wasnt entirerly neceserry but whatever :D Really enjoyed it, thanks a lot.

Great story, thank you.

Regards Prince