I know you posted this almost 2 decades ago but I was 2 at that time so I couldn’t read it then. Idk if you will ever read this comment but I loved this story. I love how you showed the darkness in Anakin. And I love the way you portrayed the emotion of quigon and obiwan. Thank you so much for creating such an amazing story.

I thought Qui-Gon was Dooku’s Padawan and this Yodas grandpadawan?

You should call this fanfiction “how to find out the f you have a soul”
Honestly I was almost crying when qui and Obi had that big argument

Anyway, this story is written brilliantly and the plot is really good aswell! Keep up the brilliant work

I loved this (even though it made me cry in some parts) and I can’t wait to get to the next part!

I assume this has been pointed out before, but I'll point it out again.

Canonically, Bant is a Mon Calamari. Like that guy in Return of the Jedi who says "It's a trap!" She looks like a walking squid, and probably thinks Obi-Wan looks equally not attractive.

ooooooooo...
is this gonna be Obidala?
i like Obidala

Qui—Gon is a fucking bastard !

Hmm. I read to the end hoping the Quigon and Anakin bashing would go away. Or at least get less obvious, because the hate is very blatant. But it didn't happen. And though Obiwan is my fave character, you're laying the worship on way too thick. So I guess I can commend you on your story attempt but I don't agree with your characterizations at all.

Usually for reviews I wait until I reach the end of the story so that I can go over my favorite parts. However, you did such a wonderful job with this chapter. The emotional tension was gripping, the pacing was perfect and the feels were intense. When Qui Gon said "You'll never know how many times I wish I had" I'll admit there may have been misty eyes on my part. I look forward to reading the rest.

UGH! You're making me hate Qui-Gon and Anakin so freaking much the feels are tearing me apart! But all the same i cannot stop reading this.

Things couldn't stay the same. That hard to be one of the hardest moments, in their lives, figuring that out.

No, that wasn't Jedi, that was human. Normal people act like that, they are resentful towards someone who hurts them, and want to hurt them back in response. Jedi aren't allowed to be like that.

Now I really want Obi-Wan to meet Anakin. I don't think he hate Anakin. Anakin wasn't the one who decided to leave the Temple, and was simply enthusiastic to become a padawan. Obi-Wan is reasonable enough to notice that.

I thought that Qui-Gon would be surprised to see Adi with Obi-Wan. It was rather arrogant of him to assume they were apologizing, wasn't it? I think Adi made it a bit extreme. He truly felt he was following the will of the Force. I don't know if that means he was, or he needs to pay more attention to what is his will, and what is the Force's, but you have to give him credit for trying to do what is right.

Really, in what circumstances would they have not taken him back to the Temple? They need as many Jedi as they can get, and Anakin is too dangerous to be left alone.

After reading this story, and all your enthusiastic recommendations for An Untimely Frost, I might have to read that next!