Reviews for Harry Potter and the Congregation of the Asp |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished reading the first part and was very pleased to realise I have 2 more stories ahead of me! Thank you for your time and for your work! |
![]() ![]() I just finished part one. I was very very pleased with your imaginative tale. Now on to part two |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m reading this chapter and I’m like |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alice.. Alice Longbottom... Dunno where you're getting Alicia. That's the chaser on the Gryffindor quidditch team. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I swear this is titled "Harry Potter and the...", you'd think that HARRY might actually have some badass moments. I get you want your whole teamwork/family bit.. that is fine. But seriously, give each person a stage to shine and then do their togetherness. Harry has barely done ANYTHING to date. So he can cast a powerful shield spell... lame.. lame as fuck. You have all these people around Harry that are badasses and Harry is still a little chump. I get that his is just 15, but give him something. |
![]() ![]() With regards to Ron. "Out, damned spot! Out, I say!—One, two. Why, then, ’tis time to do ’t. Hell is murky!—Fie, my lord, fie! A soldier, and afeard? What need we fear who knows it, when none can call our power to account?—Yet who would have thought the old man to have had so much blood in him." -Lady MacBeth |
![]() ![]() Thou hast it now: Quidditch, Guardian, authority all/ as the old coot promised and I fear/ Thou play'dst most foully don't. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the ingratiation of the Catholic (I read that as Christian) Church with the story. It makes sense that within the Church there would be knowledge of magic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cedric was right! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This cliffie caught me by surprise! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Greg’s comment was perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Charlie is an extremely underused character in fanfiction. I like that you’re pairing him with Fleur. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Talk about Weasleys not having any sense! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The speech was annoying so I skipped it, it was full of pedantic rambling. |
![]() ![]() ![]() no voldy did not mark harry with a killing curse that would be impossible since the killing curse LEAVES NO MARK'S AT ALL also where the hell did voldy's body go after after the spell rebounded and killed him when he tried to kill harry as a baby because again THE KILLING CURSE LEAVES NO MARKS so where the hell did voldy's body disappear to |