i love it, forever and ever

I really liked it, your writing is very well written good job. I was wondering if you were going to write another one shot for when Kirk wakes up at the end?
Amazing job

You want a comment? I'll give you a comment! THIS FIC DEMANDS A SEQUEL! Kirk gets resurrected afterwards so have them stare awkwardly at each other for a couple minuets, trying to stutter out excuses and explanations before Kirk (or hell, Spock) says "Fuck it!" and yanks the other man down into a kiss,

Live long and write MOAR! :)

very good

Ohh...I'd love to see a sequel to this where Jim is resurected by Khan's blood like in the movie, but now they're all awkward because of this.

Oh my. That was good. My favorite part of the whole movie.

Beautifully heart wrenching!

Please more! Can't end like this! Keep going, loving this and want Jim & Spock in love.

Very heart wrenching.

Love it

You should continue it and make it a longer story! It was totally amazazing!

Nice job. The whole piece was well written and captured the undercurrent. I just wish you'd taken the scene one step further to Spock's shout.