This was a great story. I loved the Robin x Tharja summer-scramble-story from the dlc, which is why I also love to see what happens after that. This was really cute and romantic and I enjoyed your depictions of the characters.

Its weird reading these because Robin and Noire are my Fire Emblem OTP so basically im reading a bunch of one shots of Robin and his wife's mother. Akwarrrdd...

I'm just going to come out and say it. I've never really got into fan-fiction because it usually deviates from the source material dramatically, but holy crap this is gold. So good I made an account on this site just to praise your work and this story (all chapters included of course). I reluctantly read through each page in the last two days (I purposely tried to limit myself to like a couple chapters a day but decided "screw that I gotta keep reading"). After I read this I thought "their might be other good stories from other authors", nope this is hands down one of the best I've ever read.

What I personally love about this is the fact how close it is with the actual game. There are no love triangles, harems or exhausting amount of drama between established characters (Not that i'm bashing. If its your cup of tea all the more for you). Its just a great addition, expanding on top of whats already there. The characters are represented perfectly to their video game counterparts. From the way Tharja and Robin were portrayed to even Chrom's wedding. Everything felt authentic and genuine.

To some it might not be the best as there isn't much in the way of conflict or extensive character development. Honestly however there's enough of that. You offer just enough in each character that way even if you played as female Robin or married a different woman as Male Robin it still feels like "your" Robin ("your" as in the person reading this review's Robin, not the author. Unless you're the author in which case it is your Robin). However I would like to iterate that although there isn't much in conflict/drama if you so chose to add some I feel you would handle it gracefully and not at all convoluted.

The only gripe I could see anyone having with the story is possibly a couple errors here and there. I seem to remember a word missing in a few lines (e.g. ...that's when pressed against him. Where it should say ...that's when {she} pressed against him). Nothing too extreme. There are also quite a few people who hate this pairing with a passion, so there's hate for the sake of hating.

Well that is my review, hope I didn't come off a certain way I just really enjoyed the read. I understand if you stopped or moved on from this story, but if you ever write more I'll certainly come back and continue reading. Keep up the good work, you've definitely made a fan.

P.S. I'm 100% on board of extending chapters. Like how chapter 6 continued 5. If chapter 10 is 7 pages long I'm totally okay with that.

What happened to the 10th chapter?

I enjoyed reading this. One thing though, going off Tharja's support conversations, she was on good terms with her family. At least, good enough to send letters checking up on them while she traveled.

This story is so excellent and cute. The way you depict Tharja makes her look adorable, softer than usual. People often make her creepy, you know? But yours has a good deal of love in her.

I saw this coming a mile away well when you got tharja as a wife just be warned she's always planning somthing

I like this story a lot also as much has I hate to say it say'ri is my waifu ok'd I like her supports while tharja is well yea

Well I found this and I'm getting a little idk how you put it curious I guess?

i just read all the way from chapter 1 to the end of chapter 9 and this was an amazing story and i was really impressed by your creativity and use of words. i think you could be an amazing author someday!

Female Morgan's sadistic side is very in line with her having Tharja as a mother. I'm all for that.

All of the couples I've seen so far are ones that I'm a fan of. I'm looking forward to seeing if this trend continues.

That was a very nice chapter; I was very sad when Emmeryn committed suicide, that was one of the saddest moments. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Awesome dude. All your stories match my headcanon so much it's scary. Cant wait to read more of your stuff!

This is good! This is very good!