Reviews for Shades of Green and Aquamarine |
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Kwah-lity chapter 25 . 6/13/2018 Glad to see this fic is live again, thought I had to give up that dream! ;D One very tiny thing that bothers me as a Japanese speaker is the usage of 'まあ/maa' in the sentence "Maa Ichigo, thank you for the...". 'まあ/maa' does translate to a "Well," which is the way I believe you intended to use, however, in colloquial contexts 'まあ/maa' is used more as a "Actually" / "To tell the truth" / "I don't wanna admit the following but" kind of "well" and not like a "At any rate" kind of "well". I can't think of any appropriate substitutions at the moment but if I do I'll comment again. It's your story, so of course you don't have to change it, but just wanted to let you know that it would sound a bit odd to a Japanese speaker. Looking forward to more! |
ImATrooper chapter 24 . 11/5/2017 I started reading this expecting a Grimmnel romance, and kept reading because this is the best cop drama fics I have ever read. The side of struggling drug addict Grimmjow is a huge bonus. I love the pasts you have created for the characters, and how it is coming back to haunt them, and youve done a wonderful job at intermingling all the characters! Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing! |
Regal Wish chapter 24 . 6/23/2017 Oh my god. This is so amazing! I got sucked in right after the first paragraph. You have done an amazing job of keeping up with the suspense and guessing games. I am dying to know how all of this will play out. See you next chapter! |
Guest chapter 24 . 1/28/2017 Oh gosh do I ever need more of this. |
Sleeze chapter 24 . 12/3/2016 GrimNel! |
Missyann13 chapter 24 . 10/28/2016 Great update! Poor grimmjow. I feel so bad for the guy. |
Missyann13 chapter 23 . 10/4/2016 Please please please update soon. I gotta know how it ends! |
Jamie chapter 22 . 11/2/2015 I love your stories so much and your writing hope you updated them soon these 2 are my opt |
endingsarenotalwaysbad chapter 22 . 9/7/2015 Ah it's great that all my ships are piled in this story! And I really like the plot so far :D |
Kay chapter 22 . 5/3/2015 Oh I am just loving this story |
StayFreeG3 chapter 22 . 4/11/2015 When I saw that you'd updated I may or may not have screamed. I LOVE THIS STORY. I'm so glad you got back to it! This pairing needs more love and the way you capture their character is amazing! Update soon! |
Guest chapter 21 . 10/7/2014 Update Just Friends please! Good luck at the university |
Jenicide24 chapter 21 . 10/7/2014 oh no! so good, cliffhanger and BAM... gotta wait :) can't wait for the next update! |
Kwah-lity chapter 20 . 8/20/2014 You know, the worse part about this fic is that I will NEVER KNOW HOW IT ENDS. I'm so sad because I finally found a fic worth reading and then it ends so open endedly like ughhh! I mean I guess I shouldn't talk because I have a fic in the works, and real life gets one busy, but STILL I would've like to see Aizen and Nnoitra (that bastard) go down. Overall, wonderful plot, angsty -wish Jow-kun would quit for good though. Thanks for the read, you're lovely! |
Jenicide24 chapter 20 . 7/29/2014 omigosh this is getting soooo goood! :) |