Can't wait till next story.

Well, that was dramatic. I don't know what I was expecting to happen to the Monk, but since one of the main points of the newer series is that the Doctor is the only Time Lord left, I suppose if it were a real episode his death would be kind of inevitable. Not even the Master got a break on that point.

I kind of liked the reference to the Doctor's past at the end there. In the newer series it's only ever been mentioned in a casual remark to Rose (that she probably dismissed as not hearing him right) and an explanation to Donna about his reluctance toward Jenny. Maybe it's been mentioned once or twice more than that (the last episode I saw was the finale of season 5; after that we didn't get a channel that played it) but probably not that often.

Anyway, great job! I'll be watching for the next story. :)

Previous adventures of the Doctor and Bella have been really good, but this one had to have been about the best ever!

Having the first in it was awesome.

Don't suppose someday there can be encounters with any other of the Doctor's previous incarnations?

Maybe fourth or seventh?

Grand job on such a great adventure.

Good last chapter.

I liked how the Doctor(s) fixed everything up with the timeline. While it wasn't good that the Monk died, I don't blame the Doctor for not being too sad about his death.

Keep up the good work!

Yay! I'm happy she got back to 'her' Doctor!
I can't wait for the next update:)

As always, this was great to read. Thanks for taking the time to write and share it with us.

Good chapter.

Again, while I still can't condone what the Monk has done, I still feel slightly sorry for him as all he wanted was his planet back. It's only the way he went about it that was totally unacceptable.

Interesting info with the Time Rings.

Keep up the good work!

Geez, Bella's running out of patience here. Can't say I blame her, really. And I loved the 1st Doctor's reaction to the timey-wimey analogy. Kinda reminded me of the Children in Need special where the Fifth Doctor met the Tenth. ;)

Good chapter.

The Monk's plan certainly has disturbing implications for the Doctor's future selves, though I can't really fault the Monk for wanting his planet to be safe. It's just the method he went about it that is wrong.

On another note, I laughed a bit at the First Doctor's reaction to the "timey wimey" line! He certainly didn't seem impressed by it!

Keep up the good work!

good chapter

Oh wow. Outside the universe? Don't think any of the Doctor's recent companions have gotten to go there yet... Bit more exciting than Pompeii would be, I guess. Although, if they were going near (or at) the point of eruption it would be kind of amusing to see if they'd catch a glimpse of Donna and the 10th Doctor running around and dealing with the soothsayers. Of course, since this is an alternate reality and all, they probably never got there, right?

oh shit the monk, i assume the monk knows the truth about Gallifrey not being destroyed. but refuse to tell the doctor this or like the master he is running (Probably hearing the war doctor has the moment.)

Good chapter.

I liked how you explored the planet, Earth's history and everything else. It was very interesting to read.

Nice reveal at the end with the Monk. I actually was thinking that it could have been Omega, as when the Doctor mentioned "outside the universe", I thought of Omega's anti-matter universe.

Looking forward to finding out more about the Monk next chapter.

Keep up the good work.

No Daleks? That's intriguing... No mention of Cybermen, either, but that's understandable, since the Doctor wasn't around to crash into Pete's World in this timeline. At least, that's what I'm guessing.

Good chapter.

It was interesting to find out more about this world. Nice reference to The Fires of Pompeii.

Keep up the good work.