Reviews for The First Punch
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5
Damn right this isn't good. It's frickin AWESOME. One thing i will never understand is how can people be so self-critical...
nys chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
poor sammy...always gets in trouble.
DropTheBasil chapter 1 . 6/21/2017
Saaaaammy! :'( good thing Dean is there to be a mother and a father to him. I love how you wrote their relationship.
Blossom9 chapter 1 . 1/6/2017
I liked this story! Nice job!
Narylfiel chapter 1 . 2/3/2016
Good God... Ok all of my feels just died in a very slow,very painful way. That was incredible...
EXCELLENT work!
Lilypad385678 chapter 1 . 1/28/2015
This is one of my favorite fics i have ever read and i have read ALOT of fics. This is in my top 10 of about 700
Mistycat chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
I'm glad you felt like writing "some fluffy and angsty..." because I always feel like reading it and I enjoyed it. Thank you.
Devil Red chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
Very well. Excellent Sam whumpage. It's nice to see Dean's tender side.
Sue chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
This was so moving. I love how you worded the ending...he just loves Sam Winchester too much.
Frakking Toasters chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
No this is really good. And heartbreaking. But still really good. I want to give Sammy a big hug and get him out of there. xo
SNsavvy chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
I cannot believe you are only 16! You write with such depth and feeling. Your stories (which I have just started to read, but will definitely continue to read!) make me feel happy and sad at the same time. I love the brothers just being there for each other, no matter what. But I also feel the pain they are going through. You are an extraordinarily talented writer! Keep it up and thank you so much!
Kira the cat chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
If you hear that sound, it's my heart breaking in two. I almost cried reading this. It also doesn't help that I was listening to The Thirteenth Anthology from Kingdom Hearts and the spikes in the song matched this perfectly. This is one of those fics that makes me love Dean like the big brother he is, want so scoop up and comfort Sam no matter how old he is, and do to John Winchester what Johnny Gat did to Shogo Akuji in Saint's Row 2. That's how emotionally good this fic is to me. Writers like you make my day because you know how to break me in all the fragile parts and that's what I like about a good well written fic.
thisisgarbagedontreadit chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
that right there was the sound of my heart breaking
mandancie chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
I think this was absolutely awesome! :) I would love to see a follow-up on this to see Dean's confrontation with John after this. :)
the-devoted-bugg chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
I know this is sad, but I just love how protective and parent-like Dean is in this story! Great Story!
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