Ooh, I loved hearing Lily’s perspective in this one. I usually don’t read first person fics, but your writing is absolutely compelling. I’ve really enjoyed this story, and I appreciate that you clearly marked it as Abandoned. I know I’ll be sad at the end of the next chapter, but your writing was too good to stop after reading the Hermione and Severus POVs in your part one. Thank you for sharing such an amazing story w such a kickass Hermione!

Wow has it really been five years? This story was so well written I looked forward to every update.

I hope you are doing well and maybe one day your muse will inspire you again. I would even be thrilled with a bulleted outline of where you were taking this wonderful story.

Thank you and take care.

I love this story and am so, so sad that you haven't updated it in years. I hope you're well.

If anyone does pick up this story and lets you know. Would you please put a note on your page thanks

OMG! WHAT A HORRIBLE PLACE TO ABANDON THIS STORY! I know you stated it was abandoned and up for adoption, but REALLY?! You stopped at such a CLIFFHANGER!
*sighs dejectedly*
Thank you for writing as much as you did.

Wonderful story please please finish it I want to know what happens
The feeeels!

Where’s the restttt? D:

i do hope you're better now. pleeaassseeeee update soon! this is a truly amazing story and i really want to see what happens next. D:

Ugh, and you went and made Salazar so damned cheeky and fascinating and ugh. I'm so sad that this has been abandonedI've spent almost the last week bingeing all three stories to the point of murdering my phone battery on the daily. Your writing and characterization and just everything is so beautifully on point and I love it all so much.

I absolutely adore your writing and hope you continue health allowing, you are a talented and twisting-plot writer which is rare with time fics. Unique angles. Best wishes to your health - troubleandsheknowsit

Thank you for this great story so far. It has been a pleasure and I hope, that someday you'll come back to finish it.

There are so many original ideas in this, that you left me with the same kind of aw at all these epic phantasies that only very few stories manage. Aside from the general pleasure I felt a little overwhelmed by the Mary-Sue-ness of this story. You developed it well enough, but it still bothered me that Hermione was getting most things a little too easily. I would have wished for a more rational antagonist than James Potter, who was mostly throwing childish tantrums while Hermione got unbelievably powerful in magics, emotions and strategics. As well as the perfect relationship with Severus. And an epic wand. You know... these things.

Still, and that's by far the important part, I loved this story.

Oh this story is so interesting, i love it. Will you come back one day?

I read the first part and I loved it and now I am kinda saddened and upset to see that you have not finished this story. I really don't like to start stories I cannot finish. I do hope you start writing this again. when you do I will read it.

Please Please please! start writing again! PLEASE

I absolutely loved all 3 stories. I am bummed that it hasn't been finished thou. Sad Face!