Reviews for Break Me Every Time
meghannn chapter 1 . 7/11
so, chances are you won't see this, but on the off chance that you still get notifications,I've recently watched the series and of course fell in love... on a search I found your fics and goooooood so good
tonjapr chapter 53 . 3/12
Well it seems I was very wrong in my predictions. That was a pretty much perfect ending and I'm glad I kept reading despite the amount of times I doubted I'd like the ending. The Debra/Dexter was kept to an acceptable level and even made believable and although the hunt for Vogel took ages it ended the way I feel it should have. I'm sorry for not believing in this story at the beginning and if i came across as rude in my other review. I loved it.
tonjapr chapter 10 . 3/4
When i started reading this I was really exited that i finally found some actually good Dexter fanfiction with quality writing. But it's shaping up to become an incesty mess with an overly frustrating back-and-forth between Dexter and Vogel&Saxon like it was with Trinity. The way this is set up im sure he's not going to kill them for at least 200k more words, and as interesting as the premisse is it soon just gets annoying.
I'm mainly just disappointed and not particularly convinced I should continue and had to vent a bit. But I guess I'll read on until I'm too grossed out by the inevitable incest. I'm a few years too late to have any influence on it after all.
warriorofdark chapter 43 . 12/3/2019
Its been such a long time since ive read this story. I forgot where i left off when i was forced to abandon reading. Took me awhile of skimming through late chapters to find where i left off. Kinda forgot how amazing of a storyteller you are. Because of how long its been i forgot that reading this story actually makes me feel emotion.
Knew there was going to some troubles and all that for Dexter. I knew he wasnt just going to have a straight trouble free shot to freedom. Reading this chapter and the previous one i was shocked at what happened to Deb. Im glad that Hannah met a bloody end after what she did to Deb. And Vogel i hope she gets whats coming to her.

Gonna continue reading the rest of this story. But im gonna pace myself. Dont want to speed through it. This isnt an ordinary fanfiction story. Im going to savor the experience slowly. Read a chapter a day.
TeoEmer chapter 53 . 3/22/2019
“Things turn dark eventually” well that’s an encouraging fucking start

HARRISON NO MY BABY BOY... (how old is he now anyways?) AND WHYYYYY HE DESERVES HAPPINESS. NOT ONLY HIM BUT JUSTICE, ASTOR, CODY, QUINN, ANGEL, VINCE, DEBRA, AND EVEN DEXTER. BUT NO ONE IS HAPPY. IM UPSET

WHY IS DEXTE WHY IS THIS THE END?! THIS OPENS A DOORWAY FOR ANOTHER 53 CHAPTERS LIKE WHAT

DEBRA IS MAKING ME SAD
EVERYTHING IS MAKING ME SAD
I NEED TO GO READ SOME FLUFF

(But I’m glad she’s back on the police force kicking ass)

AND JOEY. HE’S SO FUCKING LOYAL KUDOS TO HIM

DEBA NO
DEX WHAT
WHAT WOULD DEB HAVE SEEN IF SHE DID LOOK IN THE COFFIN?!

IS JUSTICE DEXTER’S?

THIS “ENDING” IS ACTUALLY A GIANT EFFING CLIFF HANGER IM SORRY TO SAY BUT THIS IS NOT AN ENDING WHERE IS THE REST WTF HAPPENS

i really need to go read some fluff...

But seriously. Thank you so much for this.
TeoEmer chapter 52 . 3/22/2019
"Hello, baby Justice," he whispers into the incubator. "My name's Harrison. I'm going to be your big brother." He adjusts her woollen yellow cap when she twists and it comes loose on her head. "That means I'm going to look after you." NOSTALGIA SADNESS WHY I CRY

Fuck that. I decide they're wrong and I'm fine. DEBRA START TAKING CARE OF YOURSELF WTF

AND I KNOW I ALWAYS COMMENT IN ALL CAPS AND I KNOW IM AN OBNOXIOUS PAIN BUT I THINK THIS CHAPTER IS GIVING ME A DEPRESSIVE EPISODE

BABY JUSTICE WHYYY IS EVERYTHING SAD
TeoEmer chapter 51 . 3/18/2019
Everyone here has major issues and traumas and you are really good at portraying them... btw this is MILES better than season 8
TeoEmer chapter 50 . 3/18/2019
THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND FLUFFY AND CUTE AND SWEET AND NOSTALGIC AND YOU WERE ABLE TO SEAMLESSLY TURN IT INTO TRAGEDY THIS HAS JUST MADE MY FAVORITE CHAPTER EVEN THOUGH IM EXTREMELY EXTREMELY CONFUSED AND SAD AND IM SO GLAD I FINALLY HAVE WIFI BACK SO I CAN KEEP READING THIS BUT HOLY FUCK THIS WAS SO GOOD IT SOUNDED LIKE A POEM OR SOMETHING AND THEIR RELATIONSHIP IS EVERYTHING BUT WHAT IS UP WITH THE ENDING DO YOU WANT ME TO CRY AGAIN!?
TeoEmer chapter 49 . 3/6/2019
(please excuse my excessive excitement) YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO PUT THIS MANY EARTH SHATTERING PLOT TWISTS INTO A SINGLE CHAPTER
WHEN I FOUND OUT DEB LIVED I ACTUALLY SCREAMED. MY FRIEND CAME IN TO CHECK ON ME BECAUSE I PROBABLY SOUNDED LIKE I WAS DYING I WAS JUST SO AMAZINGLY HAPPY AAHHHHHHHHHHHHWHYYYGAHHH
I HAVE CONCERNED SO MANY PEOPLE BY OBSESSING OVER THIS FIC
WHY THE HECK IS DEXTER DEAD?! I ACTUALLY THINK IT’S BETTER THAN DEB DYING BECAUSE HE WOULDVE BEEN ON DEATH ROW ANYWAYS BUT STILL WTF
IM SO HAPPY AND SAD FOR DEB AND EVERYONE ELSE LIVING OUT THEIR SCREWED UP LIVES
BUT YES PLEASEEEE GET HARRISON THERAPY, THE KID NEEDS IT
I HOPE HE CONTINES TO GROW CLOSE TO DEB AND AHHHJEHDNRHD I HATE THIS YET I LOVE IT TO PEICES I THINK I DIED AND RESSURECTED AT LEAST 12 TIMES THIS CHAPTER
I ACTUALLY HAD WORK I NEEDED TO START TODAY BUT I COULDNT DO ANYTHING BECAUSE MY MIND WAS COMPLETELY SCRAMBLED BY THIS GODDAMN FIC
THIS PUT ME ON A ROLLER COASTER OF 20,000 DIFFERENT EMOTIONS AND PLOTLINES AND I KNOW THIS COMMENT IS INTENSE BUT I CANNOT EVEN CONVEY HOW MESSED UP I AM BY THIS IM STILL SCREAMING
TeoEmer chapter 48 . 3/6/2019
I love that Dexter’s light still seeps through despite all the dark thst has been exposed about him :(
TeoEmer chapter 47 . 3/4/2019
I love Vince so much, he’s such a good friend. And ughh im so happy Deb is still here in some sense... it’s wayyyway better than her not there at all
TeoEmer chapter 46 . 3/3/2019
im emotionally spiritually and mentally ruined for life but I absolutely LOVE that dexter hallucinates Debra,, I know that it’s just his mind conjuring her up but i like to imagine it’s her actual concious ghost
TeoEmer chapter 45 . 3/3/2019
MY EMOTIONS
MY EMOTIONS!
YOUR WRITING IS TRAGICALLY PHENOMENAL AND IM GOING TO KILL SOMETHING BECAUSE OF IT
she needs to be okay
TeoEmer chapter 44 . 3/3/2019
Of course her first response is “fuck am I?” I love her so much
TeoEmer chapter 43 . 3/3/2019
This was so emotional and heartbreaking and just the transition from baby debra to dying debra and just god everything im going to cry Harrisons gonna grow up one traumatized child wtf and i know they’re not going to get a HEA but can she pleasepleaseplease be okay because im certainly not you’re such an amazing writer and my soul is hurting becase if it why
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