Wonderfully written.I wish there are more fanfiction about this pairing.

Young Elize's vocabulary is maybe a tad too verbous but that's about the only qualm I have with this. A nice fic.

Not bad for a little one-shot! I'm very happy to see the pairing, that's for sure! It seems like this is the only fic on this site that pairs Jude and Elise. ;w; And you did a pretty good job on this. I would love to see more of the pair in the future from you. -

This was very nice! I always thought that Elize and Jude were a better pairing, especially since Jude is the one who initially brings Elize on the journey. Personally, I think her relationship with Jude is easier to picture than with Alvin. And props for being the only (and supposedly, first) person for writing a story on these two.

The ONLY thing that would have made this better, was if it was more of a story (y'know, plot and all), and it didn't just focus on how she felt in the beginning, and after the end of the game.

Since all you disapprovers of elizexalvin are reading this I'd like to say that ironically I think that the game is lacking and needs, well , a third game! But unlike before you will not be able to play as milla or Jude or even elize no my friend. You will be playing as mark! I will use a fanfic to put into play the opening cutscene. It begins with a young boy running towards his mother when, all of a sudden, a red glint catches his eye.(ps scene is anime) I shall write more later.

dawww, this was a sweet and adorable oneshot! Awesome job! :D

Short and sweet. I like it, and congrats on being the first to do this.

aww so sweet jude saiding he feels the same as she deos