continue please

hoping you'd one day return to update and praying youre unaffected in this trying times.

What possible point was there in having chapter 2 be a thing. Theres already garenteed tragedy and hes gone through enough shit yet hes given a loving home only to apparently have something horrible happen to that family or at least the little girl while skipping over it to add yet more drama teasing at it later on.

No fucking thanks already killed my desire and I loved the start so I'm extra annoyed.

Unnecessary drama and tragedy is unnecessary.

As short as this is I hope the tragedy tag doesn't involve this families deaths.

Interesting. But the bit of her somehow losing her powers just because shes on a different world makes no damn sense.

If she actually got her powers from the planet like superman from the color of a star sure. But that's not the case unless it was made that wat. Which it didnt seem to be the case.

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Your first one was a much better story. Yes it has errors but overall much better. This one has good points to be sure yet the other had a much better flow, character interactions and better back story. So I am not going to continue reading. Good luck in the future.

Keep updating. This fanfiction is too good to be left alone, I'm curious on how you will Saeko and Naruto interact when they are separated with the others.

I love it!

hello I found your story the other day and review it, and I really liked it, hopefully at some point you continue, greetings.

This fic still alive or nah?

this is really stupid

flo463 if you don’t like it then don’t read it. There is literally no point for you to be here if you are just going to flame lmao.

could someone explain to me why Takashi is mysteriously absent of this story?!
Oh my God! it is true! it's only for Naruto to have a harem (why try to make complicated when we can do simple huh? by completely replacing the protagonist as if he did not exist, to avoid giving him a pairing or his own harem), and what this crossover turns yet in another naruto harem fic?! -_-
as if Naruto still needed a harem!

Disgusted and disappointed to see that as there are 3 pretty girls, the Naruto's fans throw themselves on it and give Naruto a harem!
most often at the expense of the protagonist like Takashi!
is it too much to ask for a SIMPLE pairing for Naruto? an UNIQUE pairing!

only lonely consolation: Takashi is not genderbender to add him in Naruto's harem!

i'm out of this shit!

Much Much Better than the first one. Not to say that one was particularly bad