Reviews for A Broken Hallelujah
carooleemt chapter 24 . 3/7
Oh, I know it’s been forever but...
carooleemt chapter 6 . 3/5
I am enjoying the AN you make with this story. They are different from the notes I am used to reading as they are contemplatetive .
carooleemt chapter 2 . 3/4
I am aware that this story was written long ago. I am a fan of your writing. I’m really enjoying this take on the evolution of a relationship. It seems rather realistic and intriguing. I know it’s complete but I’m anxious to see where you take it. Once again, I’m liking this story.
halfbadgirl chapter 24 . 7/1/2019
This story has me captivated. Quite honestly, it could turn into Rizzles or not and be completely authentic. There is a profound love growing between Jane and Maura or precisely because they are each other’s yin and yang. And whether it turns romantic or not depends entirely on Jane’s wokeness ... and Maura’s partner timing. Seems true to cannon, yeah?

You capture their voices and nuisances with graceful skill ... including Jane’s sexual preconceptions. Being bisexual myself (and I ain’t no young bird, to be sure), I’m always perplexed by the rigidity of hetero-vs-homo Sapiens. Thirty plus years ago, when I was young and hopeful, I would have told you that the true reality was that the vast majority of us are unrealized bisexuals ... merely waiting for the timing and personage to be right for our own self-blossoming. A budding Sartrean embracing her existential Self and projecting it onto the World. But, nah ... the hetero-homo debate continues. With heteros still yelling a wide margin! But homos rebutting with courage and grace. While the Bi-pan-Omni-A crowd watches safely from the sidelines, blending whichever way they lean. So, thanks for the embedded manifesto ... it keeps the convo rolling!

So, just in case you swing by these parts from time to time, know that you still have fan-readers who appreciate your stories ... and whatever wisdom you so choose to impart. And if you choose to add a chapter or two to this story, I’ll be following ya.

Cheers!
claudeReader chapter 10 . 6/8/2019
had a lousy week and came here to take my mind off things... it's just as nice as I remember :)
anyway, I just wanted to say hi and hope you're doing well these days and maybe at some point you'll find the time and inspiration to finish this.
just so you know, your stories are well appreciated :)
Super-Blue-Bloodmoon chapter 24 . 5/19/2019
I would love to read more to this story. I just finished re-reading and more chapters would be appreciated.
Guest chapter 24 . 1/24/2019
I was reading this at least the third time and still not sure if this is the end or if you planned on doing some chapters more. Maybe you could give as a final chapter, it is a far too fine story to leave it kind of unfinished. Nonetheless, I love this story, maybe that is the reason I feel so sad about it. CU in another story!
Guest chapter 24 . 8/19/2018
This is a really great story. I only really hope you sometime find the chance to finish it, it somehow depresses me to see Jane hanging out of the window the way she does.
grimorie chapter 24 . 8/17/2018
I know this is on permanent hiatus but I just wanted to say, I loved reading this story. Your dynamic for Jane and Maura is one of my favorites, and I have no regrets reading this story, I love slow burn romances but most of all I love Jane's slow moments of discovery and healing.

Thank you for sharing this story!
Guest chapter 24 . 1/15/2018
I really hope you update one day this was such a great story
ynot45 chapter 19 . 12/24/2017
How many ONE's and TWO's do you think BASS does every day ?
ynot45 chapter 18 . 12/24/2017
Checkers draughts.
ynot45 chapter 16 . 12/24/2017
Three vertical straight lines is only art to a child.
To think it is a master piece worth hundreds or thousands ( insert currency )
Then every five year old would be multi- millionaires.
ynot45 chapter 12 . 12/24/2017
Thankyou for an enjoyable " AU " story.
fries chips
chips crisps
booth is sometimes referred to as a kiosk in BRITAIN .
Guest 0815 chapter 24 . 10/31/2017
I wished you would find the chance to continue this story. It is too sat how it sits here (more to it, Jane feels broken to me and I would love to see those two finally as a couple).
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