Reviews for Concerns of a King
freshly caught Cornish pixies chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
You're not gonna leave it there right? Right?! Good.
Cos that was just hilarious! I was half expecting Merlin to start laughing madly :P
Update soon!
fcCp
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Wow, way to go. A story that is both hilarious and sad! Actually, I found it absolutely funny in the beginning and in the middle but I felt kind of bad because of that in the end. Quite a feat!
Akemi-Malfoy chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
I loved it as a oneshot, but I'd be really happy if you write another chapter with a happier ending xD I felt so sad for merlin in this one ;;
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
"Arthur had read a book about how these intervention like procedures were supposed to occur."
So funny!
Please continue!
Alien Hedgehog chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
yessss Please continue it?
hidii chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
That is amazing so far!
Though i could think of one big improvement: please more chapters!
TardisDragon211B chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Pleassssssse continue!
That was amazingly well written and exciting! A conversation between two friends was very suspenseful. Good job
sarajm chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Loved this!
Mika271170 chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
That was amazing!
I love these kind of emotional/angsty dialoges between our boys,especially so well writen stories like this one!
Please,more!
Klaroline Mikealforbes chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
I think it'd be a great next chapter but if you dont want to you could leave it at this.
mersan123 chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Hey,
Great one shot but would love to see you continue it. Definite potential for at least one more chapter. Hope you will consider.
Thanks again,
Sue