this is cute! more! more! more!

I'm a huge fan of your writing! I read all of your One Piece and Fairy Tail fanfics and this was the last one I read. I can't wait for the next chapter :) I love your writing - the character development, description and imagery, the nuance, everything! I look forward to reading more when you get a chance to update!

I'm so I'm love with this story. It's so sad that you haven't updated in a while, I hope you are okay.

But Laxus trying to sweep Cana off her feet is so sweet. And the way he tried to charm her .

I think I was the one to fall for him haha.

I hope you update soon, even if it's only one last chapter to give closure to the story hehe.

{cries because WANT MORE!}

Godsdamn it come BACK! It is criminal, absolutely CRIMINAL I tell you, for you to abandon this here and now - it's so excellent and delicious and adorable! /./

Lol. Daddy!Gildarts is becoming one of my favorite things as well. Nicely done. And Laxus is lucky to be in one piece. Ooooo. Please write more of this one. XD

Laxanaaaaa. Their aren't enough of these fics, though I'm always stuck between Laxana and Mira X Laxus. ((Don't know the ship name there.))

i love this story! cant wait for an update 3333

This is great. I swear. You have to continue. please.

What fluid and captivating dialogue! You are an amazing writer- I'm hooked on your work. I've always been curious about a Laxana romance, you spice it up beautifully. And the side bits of Levy and Gajeel are just so adorable.

Amazing job 3

oh my god! AMAZING! please please please update soon! it's perfect! i swear,it's amazing!

-C

Aaaahhhh, Laxana fics always make me happy! Seriously, it's an amazing story so far and I hope you update soon!
P.S.- who doesn't love daddy!Gildarts?

I am laughing about the Gildarts part and I love the story! Keep it up!

I'm baaaaaaack! Did ya miss me much in the whole...ten minutes it took me to read and another ten for this review? (Okay maybe not a full ten minutes for the review but still...).

First off, in this chapter I caught two typos you might want to know about. They're relatively small but I thought I'd let you know. Early on, during Laxus' chat with Gildarts, there's the phrase, "then the was...(something about the girl in question)", and 'the' should be 'there'.

The second was after she'd kissed him I believe, when he pushed her hair behind her "air" instead of her "ear".

Other than that, I completely adored this chapter. It completely lived up to my expectations and I couldn't be happier to have had the chance to read it. I love how Laxus stood firm against Gildarts and refused to back down even though he knew he didn't really stand a chance against him. And I loved how Cana came to find him after both to tease him (so like her...) but also to make sure he knew how much she appreciated his efforts.

Yet another fantastic chapter, so keep up the great work! I'm going to have fantastic dreams tonight because of you :)

FUCK YEAH. This chapter made my fan girl heart race...both times I read it. That was definitely the best description of their first kiss that I have ever seen. Insistent Laxus trying to prove his affections is so goddamn sexy that I don't even know what to do about it. I love how earnest and honest he is while still being so undeniably Laxus. It's a feat that you've just slammed out of the ballpark.

I could go on and on, but I'll spare you until chapter three's review. Before that, though, I once again commend you for your fantastic spelling and grammar. Keep up the fantastic work!