After protecting Tsunade from both Ne forces and Jiraiya I don't see why she's so hostile. Shizune seems more pathetic than usual. Honestly this story just feels allowed to thin. It's making things boring.

As far as Ame and Pain go, my understanding is that they bought into him being a God. That 3 basically worship him and his angel. The village becomes more like a cult than anything.

That fight kinda sucked. Not to mention the convenient knock out of Karin. Honestly, will you're Naruto ever get stronger?

I guessed you might do something like that. Still, acting the way she did with Sasuke in front of Naruto was risky considering she was desperate for his trust

How the hell did scar face survive three tails? That's total crap. Naruto just seems incredibly weak overall.

I didn't initially like gaara going down so easy, but it does make some sense. Kushina isn't as powerful as I thought she'd be.

I'm curious where your story is going. You've had some interesting ideas. Still, overall I'm not impressed. I just don't think you're a very talented writer to be truthful. You make things vague, you make many changes to canon but don't show why, you make up random nonsense just to be original (Anko breeding new bloodlines), and your characters make choices that no logical person would. These are the reasons I think you lack talent as a writer. I'd hate for you to think I'm just needlessly flaming you.

The reason most authors don't limit it is because the show didn't. He might've hit a headache once when releasing like two hundred or something. But think back to his fight with Gaara when Gaara Sand was invading. Gaara slaughtered clones but the hundreds. Sure, they didn't have hours worth of time memories, but that could be easily mitigated by dispersing them in set intervals. Still, yes, some people go way overboard I'll admit.

Of course Naruto didn't doubt her... are two scrolls really enough to buy his trust?

Gotta say, your logic seems extraordinarily flawed. She's potentially running her chance to get Naruto. You're making our hard for him to trust her. Or, at least, it should be. Her giving him a scroll means little and could be some form of manipulation. If he's not stupid he's going to be paranoid about her now.

Also, placing the seal on Sasuke seems pointless. Honestly, it could do more damage to Naruto's trust if it gives Sasuke a power up. Your Naruto seems crazy weak after all.

Awesome story keep it up!

Love it wish there was more

This story has been amazing I wonder what will happen to hinata

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will they find utukata and will kushiba try to get naruto to not love hinata i hope not.

31-40
i wonder if they will try to find utakata.

Please update the story its amazing and I can't wait to find out what happens next.

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awesome!
if i didn't know better i'd think that kushina is trying to keep naruto to herself.