After 5 yrs no smoking, I've had to have one after reading this! Phew!

So, Pike must be her father? Or maybe her mother's friend?

I don't get it. Does she sleep with Pike?

You have done a great job writing this wonderful story. I love it. I hope there is more to come.

LOVED this fic so much! Your OC is so interesting and I enjoyed the way you incorporated all three movies into their timeline. The slow burn between Eve and Bones is great and the friendship she has with Jim is also so well written! Can’t wait for more chapters!

I would love a follow up story!

I would love to read more! This is such a wonderful story and I hope you decided to continue to write more of it :D

You could continue this story forever and I would gladly read whatever you put out. I love them together and the world you’ve created for them.

I'd like to see the rest of the five year mission.

Thanks for the update. I'm glad to see them defeat Krall. Will you be discussing what happened while they wait for the Enterprise A to be completed at Yorktown? I've always wondered what happened there, as it was clear it took more time then was shown on screen. I look forward to more.

Thanks for an update. Eve is a very compelling OC. I look forward to more.

Loving this story!

I felt like the chap was going really quick with the plot, however i really liked the end,
now i want to read the next part!
keep it with the good job!

This needs some serious editing. I only read the first half of the first chapter, and you've used "your" instead of "you're" multiple times, and your commas are all over the place. Your summary made me really want to read this story, and I probably still will eventually, but it needs work.

Fab end to an epic story.
I'm sad to see it finished
Best Wishes