Reviews for Edge of the World
Suzy Q1068 chapter 2 . 1/18
What a sweet little story. I loved that Tony didn't get in trouble for sneaking a treat. (If I wasn't allowed chocolate chip cookies I'd be thinking of a way to sneak them too.)
He was such a brave little boy. What could be worse than not being able to find your daddy?
And sometimes children can be so creative and literate when expressing themselves, " The stars hold
up the edge of the world." Beautiful.
Knowing Grace chapter 2 . 11/1/2017
Aww! Toddler Tony is soooooo cuteee!
Jace Blackheart chapter 2 . 5/13/2017
I loved this great idea great story and very funny and Cute little tony made me laugh
C.C.Squirrel chapter 2 . 3/6/2015
Awwww, such a sweet story. Little Tony is adorable and sneakily mischievous too. I loved his reasoning for the stars job.
rhinosgirl chapter 2 . 12/22/2014
I love the interaction between Daddy Jethro and Tony here, with Tony being the "teacher". Wonderful story! Merry Christmas x
rhinosgirl chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
I love the matter-of-fact way your Tony speaks. It works extremely well with your characterization of him. So cute and yet so manly! Love him.
Thewizardanthedr chapter 2 . 9/21/2013
I love the perspective of the 3 year old. The movement and imagination is so real to them and you've captured it wonderfully.

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judythacker8 chapter 2 . 9/19/2013
I Love This Story!
torontogirl12 chapter 2 . 9/19/2013
That was so cute them enjoying the night together. Love their love for each other.
binkeybella chapter 2 . 9/17/2013
Oh my, this was just too sweet! Funny, it seemed like ages that little Tony was looking for his daddy, and yet it was probably just a few minutes in real time! I loved this, I think I'll have you take over my Unconditional series!
And yeah for Jethro for not calling Tony out on his cookie foray! Thanks for writing and posting!
Guest chapter 2 . 9/17/2013
What a nice picture of father and son enjoying the stars. Love Tony's 'logic' about them. Of course Gibbs would notice the chocolate from the cookies, hee hee, so cute that he chalked it up to Tony taking advantage of being 'alone'.

Another lovely story :)

Sue
Guest chapter 2 . 9/17/2013
Awww that was so dang sweet! I just adore the way you write little Tony and the relationship with his Daddy. AWESOME job!
peppe1951 chapter 2 . 9/17/2013
So glad that Tony found his Daddy although he had a wonderful adventure in the search.
tweetygibbs chapter 2 . 9/17/2013
I love it Hoping for more stories soon
Rica chapter 2 . 9/17/2013
Ah! Love those two Gibbs's. I love the Fate stories. The love between father and son is so real you can almost feel it. Keep up the great writing.
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