its nice to see more details of the world and its kingdoms and cultures and even now that the leaders are in play. Just curious though, do you plan to do group combat scenes? like how different groups fight, or skirmishes are done.

Finally I’ve caught up. Literally reading the authors notes and noticing the time skips between chapters was really weird. Especially since for me a week of reading all the chapters was a literally your whole time spent at college. But that’s beside the point. Amazing story so far and I do hope your updates become as frequent as you say they will be. My only question/hope is will this be a story where ruby and Weiss get together and we see them grow together or will this be a story that once they admit their feeling for each other it just because happily ever after, the end? I definitely want some smut but it is your story so your obviously free to do whatever you want with it. You’ve got my follow/fav so hope to see you soon

Your writing has improved so much! The most recent two chapters especially have been incredibly fun to read.
I love the little occurences that hapoen during scenes like lutolf catching pyrrha's admirer. They're small things that don't disturb the flow of the main narrative and yet adds so much character.
Looking forward to what happens next!

Your story is awesome and I can't wait to see how White Rose plays out

Praise be the world building displayed in TWRoV, I can smell a heavy inspiration from Game of Thrones, not that I mind. Of the many RWBY fics I have read, this one no doubt gives a unique taste when read that I am eagerly awaiting to taste again when the next chapter drops. Keep up the good work!

Ouf. Poor Weiss. All she wants is to make amends, and yet all she is doing is further distancing herself from Ruby and making Ruby's life even harder for her, what a mess. I hope they eventually come to an understanding soon and Ruby finds what fate fell upon Yang, though I sincerely doubt any of this will happen anytime soon. Now, onwards to the next chapter!

I rlly rlly love this! But I think you should change the tag on this as it’s not rlly romance and I was trying to find a romance white rose fic and stumbled upon this haha. But It was so good that I couldn’t stop read and I enjoyed the journey of reading it!:) I admire you as an author who write content as detailed and intricate as your story for free. It’s such a pleasure to read! Cant wait to see what you have else in store! Hope you are doing ok!

This is awesome! Beautifully constructed, raw, emotional, eye opening and tear jerking. This story is so fantastically different from other fanfics that you can read this without any prior knowledge of RWBY and still cry your eyes out (not that i cried, those damn ninjas are just cutting onions too close to me!). Take your time my man! Take all the time you want in creating chapters, their quality more than makes up for the time you consumed, you know what they say "quality over quantity" and i believe that saying down to the bone! Hope you stay safe during this pandemic, I can't imagine another talented artist biting the dust too early than he/she deserved to.

This has to be one of the longest running stories I’ve seen... 7 years and ever more to come... hopefully. Nearly a decade. I hope you can give this one a good ending. I like this story a lot. It intrigues me.

OH SHIZ

You did a very good job at bringing it the emotions in this chapter! Can't wait for the next one

The tension! The action! The emotion! I've enjoyed the whole story so far but this chapter was really quite exceptional, keep up the good work

Well i have very much enjoyed this. Sure there where parts where i rolled my eyes (Ruby being in awe of a ten foot tall wall, c'mon that is nothing to be in awe of even in medieval times) but overall it was a great read.

Hope it isn't dead and an update will drop soon.

Why in gods name would she feel humbled by a 10 foot tall wall? That is not that high, hell i would be able to climb it by jumping and grabbing the top of it and pulling myself up.

This story is amazing!
The characters feel three dimensional, the interactions are great, and the made perfect sense.
It’s clear how much passion you pour into it.

Keep up the good work :)