Wow this was certainly worth reading ! :)

Hmm, things got a bit accelerated the last couple chapters. Might've been better to take the story a little slower...

This is really good! Mara still has attitude but it's softer around the edges - nothing too extreme. They really do interact like a couple of friends. I think you've nailed both of their characters. :)

Great story, but there's somethign wrong with the format of Chapter Five. Just thought I'd let you know.

Hi, It was really good and I thought it quite sweet. The only thing which bugged me was I think Chapter 5...where the writing only stretches across half the page, I find that really hard to read so ended up skipping it which ruined the rest of it for me a little. If you sorted that and as someone has already mentioned they eat at 7.30 in the morn (this should be 19.30!) But Fab :) xxx

Heh, they certainly don't waste any time. ;) Very sweet and passionate.

Love Lora

Oh, this is freaking excellent. Dang!

This story was great. I have only two complaints. Then ending was a little too short and fast, and the way you did thoughts was a little distracting. Other than that. freaking excellent.

Tch Tch Tch, Skywalker...Lol. Good story so far

good fic i really loved it.

I like this chapter, and it's a good start, though i havent finished the story yet. I'm only writing a review for this chapter because i thought that you might like to know that you have them having dinner at seven thirty in the morning. A tad bit odd, dont you think? (it should be 1930, not 0730)

so romantic. love that stuff

Oh, please write more... this begining has the flavor of a good luke/mara story... Im so tired of their lives around war, you always wonder what they do on their free time...I'll be watching for more... please add soon...thanks ali.

Just wanted to let you know that this was an incredible story of Luke and Mara. I have been missing these kinds of stories for a long time. It was just what they both needed when being on vacation,, huh?

Ah, good to see L/M smutfic. I don't knew why you wanted to redo your fic, it was quite good. Loved the berry scene:) Hope you continue with this fic!