good story alittle rough around the edges but good nonetheless

It's 03:10
I dedicated the whole day to this fanfiction.
It gave me life and I praised it high.
I loved Magnus and Jace holding hands, twice.
I loved how you show the parabatai bond.
I wish, Alec had a chance to talk about his regained memories with Magnus. At least half of this fanfiction I thought it is all about Alec getting his memories back.
Then Jonathan happened and it all took a much more dramatic, unexpected turn. I think it would be much more spectacular, if you would write it more detailed. Your Jonathan is amazing, really. And I loved your Alec too, especially when he is at the mansion - you can see his warrior, selfless spirit coming back.
Please don't hate me but I hate you for killing Alec. I must say that I liked original chapter 41 more too - the alternate ending seems a bit unfinished, and I love tragedies. BUT COME ON, YOU KILLED ALEC, THE FANDOM BABY. YOU ARE LIKE JOFFREY FROM GAME OF THRONES.
So, thank you for ruining my life.

Definitely need a sequel here! Such a good fanfic but I definitely Need more Information on what Jonathan's true intentions or feelings were for Alexandra. What? Was he just curious or was there more cause the way he wanted him back I would say there was more. So definite sequel needed here!

I want more malec. XD

Wow! Just wow! I can honestly say that as much as it hurt the original ending was amazing. I would personally love a sequel based off of either ending although the first one would provide a much more emotion rich foundation. Watching Magnus mourn and try to cope would be quite the journey, especially if they are still dealing with trying to locate the Mortal Cup so Alec's' death wasn't in vain. But Malec without Alec just isn't the same. So even if it is at the end I would like to see him come back.

Thanks so much for writing this amazing story. I really enjoyed reading it from start to finish. I look forward to whatever comes next.

luv your story

Oh wowwie!
I read this for an hour and then suddenly I find out that the next chapter will be the final!

OH GEE. THIS WILL BE NICE.
IT'S 1:48 AM. WHAT AM I DOING WITH MY LIFE-
I'm also supposed to be doing somehting hours ago.. but then I logged into this site.

Oh well.

omG don't stop noooowww! Please give us mooooreee!

Love it! Please post more! Can't wait! :DD Great Job! :D (P.S: PLEASE keep Alec safe!)

Great story thanks

I am super excited about reading the next chapter! This is been a wonderful crazy story to read!

Hi, I'm Guest2. I'm a newbie :)

I love this story! It's nice and Malecy, and full of action! It's everything I like in a fanfiction! Please update again soon!

Also... You said a few chapters back you were considering making this an mpreg. Just saying, I for one don't like mpregs. That's just me though and if that's the way it goes, no hard feelings :)

This is a great story and I look forward to the next update.

This is so good, so well written, i couldn't stop reading it, i absolutely love it so please tell me your gonna finish it, you have to finish it, please i beg of you, i wanna what happens and how it ends

I loved that chapter. It's been soooo long since your last update, but it worth it. I'm dying to read what happens next. Please update 'puppy eyes' Love.

Oh god, I love this story so much it hurts ;) I've just finished reading 37 chapters and can't wait for an update. What's Jonathan plan? What will Magnus and Jace do? Will thn clave believe Alec? Will they win this war? I'm dying to know please please please update ASAP thanks :)